You know it's been awhile since you've updated this story but I'm so very curious as to what happens next

Shizune just pops up in the middle of this chapter without having been mentioned as showing up, and isn't mentioned again.

You kind of forgot about Karin at the end of this chapter.

Author-san, please update, this fic is awesome!

Okay chapter 23 with hinatas little sister that’s just gross..I have a sister and if I caught her having sex I’d run to my room and pretend it never happened ..why would I want to see my sister having sex with her husband?

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

This is really hard to read...

Nyc story.. Loved it so far... Naughty hanabi lmao

Update

Hopefully this won't turn into a Harem/threesome.
I hate polygamy.
I like how this fic is written and I would like to see how it goes.

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Loved the chapter though I want to see Ino neuter Kiba for trying to marry Hinata please do it.

Also the teleportation jutsu uses chakra depending on the size of the object being transported not the distance.

Please fix this because Naruto should be able to use it as much as he wants, maybe make it so he gets his dad completed version that lets him teleport freely almost at will.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Damn Naruto giving Hinata a ring he made him self was so romantic and cute.

Love how they are finally together now and Kurama and Hinata interactions was just cute I can see it happening.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Loved it the way you messed with there minds was amazing, I really want to know what the flash back was like though.

Also having a child Hinata and Naruto was a nice touch and I found it cute and was a bit heart broken when child Hinata was crying because I could just see it happening.

The ending was just so romantic and all the rumors people made was even more so.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

I love how you did Tsunade's character I like seeing her act a bit like Naruto family and Hokage at the same time.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)