Also, as an aside. I found your descriptions of shipping containers fascinating and informative!

Wow. Your lexicon is filled with beautiful imagery and evolved descriptions. Your Peter and Neal are intelligent men who despite their internal protestations love each and are willing to go to the mattresses for each other.

I know it’s been forever and a day! I hope you decide to take up the pen again and share more stories with us!

This was so good! I know you wrote it a long time ago but I have been gradually catching up on all your White Collar stories, and I’m pleased I had this past weekend to read this one. It was excellent! There were several surprises in the plot that kept me eagerly reading. There were several emotional moments that wrecked my heart, for instance, when Neal thought Peter was dead, and later when Neal learned Peter was alive. I was certain at one point that Neal would be shot by The Boss, no matter what I told myself I did not see the way out for him. I grew angry and disappointed at Hughes and the FBI overall, putting protocol and prejudice over the need to save Neal’s life. The visual of Neal sent out as a negotiator with a white shirtsleeve was gripping.

I wondered how Peter risked going back out to the empty space to negotiate and risked being shot at until you revealed who shot him. That was brilliant, it ensured his safety if Mozzie shot first. It gave Mozzie another role which I appreciate.

Finally, in this last chapter, the reconciliation and renewal of the friendship between Peter and Neal was wonderful. Thanks for writing for White Collar.

This was amazing! I loved how Neal was fully prepared to burn down the Russian Mob in revenge for Peter. I love how you captured their relationship and really made it come alive. Well done!

Elizabeth Burke is mighty! Her wrath terrifies hardened criminals. Cops and crooks alike would walk barefoot over broken glass for the chance of one of her smiles. All New York loves and honors her.

The relationships between Clan Burke and Mozzie, Clan Burke and Neal, and Mozzie and Neal teeter in a delicate balance. You’ve captured that well.

I really enjoyed this. Wonderfully plotted adventure. Mozzie's role was nice to see.

I’m a little late to the whole White Collar fandom - but that was absolutely amazing. I love your writing style and I love the way you write the characters; I could picture the scenes very clearly in my head at several points. I hope there’s more of your work to read!

I am so sad this story is over! I loved every minute of it!
You are an extremely awesome writer, and write these characters perfectly.
Keep up the good work,
I'm off to find another one of your stories to read )

Sometimes Hughes is "too by the book". If Neal really wanted to escape, he would've just ran instead of calling for help. Peter knows him better than anyone. Neal doesn't belong back in prison

Peter has the nine lives of a cat! I would take Mozzie in my corner any day of the week.

I hope that Neal can talk in code or something so the FBI really knows what's going on.
This story gets more and more exciting as it goes on

I love when Mozzie and Peter team up. Mozzie is a lot smarter then the FBI thinks he is

This chapter! Poor Neal, thinking that Peter is dead. I hope he can escape and bring these guys down.

I can't believe that they all thought that Neal locked him in there on purpose. Or would run.
Peter better wake up and tell them what's the truth, or Neal escape from this captors again.