one of the most beautiful fics i've ever read!one of bests! *takes a bow at the author that is you* that finished part, though small but hotter and better than many M rated fics! also moaning!

I'm on a reading rampage. This is marvelous too. I love the senetences, even if theybreak every rule of run-on sentences known to man, haha. Can't wait to read more of your work.

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I loved tis story, thankx a pickly-bunch!

Oh my god there's a second chapter and I just found out now! I NEED to read more of your writing! I hope the other half of this chapter will come too? :D yes I hope so!

Complete? COMPLETE? I want to read more! These are so good! You write amazingly.

This is marvelous. I really like all the little snippets. You could totally make a story out of many of these, and they are only a few sentences, if that. Deep writing, I'm telling you. Great job, as usual:)

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I really like this idea. Disaster and pregnant were my two favorites this time around.

Beautiful.

love number 24...your descriptive writing is extraordinary! love the visual is creates (and leaves) in my mind!

These are really, really good :)

What a creative story! Loved it, though it was terribly sad... but happy... and funny...

This is a lovely idea. Some contain so much emotion in only one sentence. I will freely admit that I had tears in my eyes at the thought of Katniss gazing at Peeta's last smile and needing to find the strength to call the funeral home. Others brought a smile to my face or even a little chuckle. Many, I found, left me wanting more. I wanted you to continue the story. That's good writing if you can suck a reader in with one sentence.

This was really beautiful. I wanted to cry when i read the one for smile. The little snippets into their lives were all really touching.

This is just so sweet I love this soooo much! I wish I could do this in drawing

I really liked it but at some points it got confusing