Reviews for White
Mdelcsw70 chapter 50 . 5/8
I found this story and I usually do not like the horror/supernatural/ mental institution type of stories, but I spent 2 days non-stop reading through your 50 chapters! I was totally hooked on the plot and your narrative style. Seems that it’s been a long time since you last updated this story, which is understandable, since real life situations take priority over writing. But you seem to have already invested so much of your time, talent and creativity on this story, that I really hope you decide to complete it some time. You have a large following for this story, and I add myself to it! If this is a too greedy request (completing the whole story) ... at least please consider completing the chapter where Shiro gets to explain his story to Orihime. I would really want to know want happens when they finally interact one on one, and if she can accept him as he is now. You have been able to convey so many intense emotions in the characters (like on Chapter 47... I was a wreck until the end of that chapter) I can only imagine how it would be when Shiro/Ichigo reveals his true self to Orihime. His sad looks were already killing me.
Guest chapter 43 . 11/10/2019
I'M GOING TO SHIT MYSELF IN EXITEMENT READING THIS AAAAAAAAAAA
YUKI-SASAYAKI chapter 1 . 7/9/2019
fufufu your stories are quite delightful rabbit-chan .
needlessdeath16 chapter 48 . 11/3/2018
you let the fans alter the story you should wright what you want to
PROTOCOL3193 chapter 50 . 10/7/2018
Jesus Tatsuki, back off woman!
Cedric634 chapter 2 . 1/10/2018
I gotta read this in the morning lol
Void of Iniquity chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
A good story, one I've been keeping an eye on for quite some time. I remember reading the first chapter of this story and not thinking it would ever turn into much. But after I left it alone for a while I came back and was amazed, there was story and foundation to the story and twists and turns and just "ARRGHH!" It was amazing! That being said, it seems that you've left it alone. I don't really mind abandoned stories, shit happens, life and what not. However, if this story ISN'T abandoned, you should clearly label it as such. Leading people on when you have no intention of continuing the story is cruel. If you do intend to continue it say so. Hell, even if you DON'T KNOW when you're going to update it. Tell us! I've been waiting for a conclusion to this story for ages. It would make me sad to see this story abandoned, but it would also be an ultimatum, Something this story desperately needs.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
Your stories are amazing i love it,(and amazing writer too) i hope u will update this story one day...
Teiko-Kiyoshi chapter 33 . 10/1/2017
My only reaction to the end of this chapter is 'FUCK, OMG, FUCK. OMG NO!' Literally.
Guest chapter 50 . 9/28/2017
I really enjoyed reading this exciting story. I hope you update soon!
Amuchi55 chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
i really really love this story
so plz don't leave us the readers hanging
can u plz update again when u have the time
thx
Cloud Bearer chapter 50 . 7/8/2017
Please update this story when you have the chance. It's been more than half a year since the last update. Don't leave us hanging
Cloud Bearer chapter 33 . 7/6/2017
Oh the memes...
Amuchi55 chapter 46 . 5/22/2017
great story I love the whole thing from the plots to how all the characters acted.
adamtello90 chapter 50 . 4/24/2017
Please keep working on this :(
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