I hope you come back to this Fanfic later. I feel like you could write forty more chapters considering how you set up a massive holy grail war in the oh world and set Shirou to fight with a much more powerful Mordred in the future.

FUCKING USELESS! FANFIC IDIOT! PLOT TRASH! FUCKING IDIOT FANFIC

FUCKING IDIOT! IDIOT FANFIC! FUCK!

This is sooooo boorrriiinnggggg

Yeah. Fuck this. I'm out. I don't even know why read the whole damn thing. Maybe just hate myself.

Any update on that novel you on? Have you published it?

Insee a big problem with your idea of them coming back if before Shirou was at risk of been Marked with a sealed designation and marked to be killed or captured and be subJect of study until the end of time, now he totally will be. And you want to condemn Godou too? Why? I think it could be better if you could get Sakura and Rin come over, Rin could learn’t with Sakura in the clock tower under Zelrecht until they get the right universe I know she is that determined!

Also in this universe part of the magic is share with his harem some loving so
He would need at least kisses with them and that would be cheating already in your view. i think Sakura will need to learn to share and maybe Shirou could reduce his Harem for the minimun

Patiently waiting an update. This is a great story, second read for me. Definitely want to see more victories for Shirou and to be honest a fight where he is actually enraged and is able to use his powers instead of the Ahriman style fight. It would definitely be amazing to see him use his abilities in a rage.

I know shirou is supposed to be a nice guy and all, but this is taking it to far, also he knows how dangerous the gem sword can be so why, why in all nine hells would he not be worried about a campione who may or may not want death and destruction to have it, much less stealing it directly from his house, he's acting like a bit of a wuss.

Hi still loving this. It's been two months! If your beta needs help, which is understandable, let me know, might need to reup on Campione but I've played and watched everything Fate.

ojala hubiera mas historias así que shirou siga siendo shirou pero con evolución exclusiva de personaje en cada historia

The lore is pretty heavy. That and cosmetic details are made the focus of this fabric rather then the interesting characters and their interactions with the world.

If your into the lore of either franchise then I say give this a read. However, if you like your characters being the focus of a story rather then the background details, I say give this a pass.

Man, hope this one hasn't been abandoned...it's too good to be left to be forgotten

If Godou is the protagonist Harem, Shirou is the character Gary-stu who is stronger than the protagonist himself.

Thanks for the chapter hope you update soon seriously it's been more than a year since the last update