As always this makes for a fun read after re-reading THSOTF. I hope we see Fay's perspective of the meeting on Mandalore as an incredibly force sensitive individual.

Great story hoping for more.

great story!

dear god... charisma is a plague now?

The Togruta youngling mentioned in this chapter... Is it Ahsoka?

This is fun. I kind of wish it wasn't separated into two fics, since a lot of scenes would make more sense if they were published as one story. I was really confused by the delivery of gardening supplies, and how the women came to be outside the ship to be kidnapped. And of course it shows Palpatine's reaction to things, which I definitely felt was missing from the other story, and confirms the fact that Bellacent came through the portal too. You should at least make it clear that both stories are necessary to get the full picture. It could be tricky to join them since one fic is written in first person and the other in third, but I have seen it done in published novels.

As for the last chapter, I actually think a more logical and in-character conclusion for Palpatine to make would be that Harry is trying to become Palpatine's true apprentice by showing off and getting rid of the competition without revealing Sidious' identity. It would be funny to have Palpy approach Harry, fully confident and ready to accept his "application" for the position of Sith apprentice. But I'm sure what you have planned will be awesome!

Harry isn’t short, I don’t understand why everyone in fics make him short just because Daniel Radcliffe is a midget

I like what you're doing with this two-pronged story. Actions have lasting consequences, and everyone has their own view of what is happening and why.

Hope you're keeping well. I'm looking forward the next installment!

Nice

Ima-Gun Di is probably one of my favorite Jedi, even if he died in the first episode he appeared in. To be fair, his Bain is literally ‘I-Am-Gunna-Die.’

Anakin's vision was what will happen, when Sidious, paranoid due to the loss of yet another apprentice, will attempt that ritual - a magical ritual that may very well kill the Force. He really should know better, considering that he wanted Harry dead just for having those strange powers. And now he's gonna use them... What a dunce. But he's right. Whatever exactly is gonna happen will definitely be unexpected.
I just hope Anakin, Obi-Wan, Ahsoka and Sinube will be okay. And all the other younglings. Maybe Harry will teach a bunch of them magic afterwards.

This is really cool, never read a fic with a companion fic before :)

cool side story. hope the 'female' sidious captured will escape/be rescued soon. wonder who she is.
also hope to see more of anakin
plus more havoc would be wonderful
xoxo

Please update!

Th for the chapter