| Reviews for Chance for a Prophecy |
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   huongdaoroma chapter 34 . 7/27 And then it comes around full circle! Perfect ending XD |
| Bruhther chapter 35 . 7/18 goddamnit, I'm not crying, you're crying |
| SiriusBlackHeir chapter 6 . 7/6 The plot could be good, but you constantly overuse adjectives and the sentences are too long and sound off. There is no storytelling flow, and it's hard to enjoy the plot when you're constantly jarred by the odd world choice. I think having a beta to help you rework the sentences could be very useful and would attract more readers to your work. Good luck! |
| Gg chapter 35 . 6/30 This is the best time travel fanfic ever you are a fucking genius I don't have enough words |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/29 Heard good things about this got 5 chapters and droped it. First chapter he knows who he is and just thinks hebis in a genjustu then bam oc who can't remember anything for no reason. You go from naruto to some oc who can't remember anything for literally no reason. Then have someone invade his mind and can't find anything which literally wouldn't happen unless you decided to take kurama away again for no reason. Nothing makes sense and you just wanted to make naruto an oc. |
| Guest chapter 35 . 6/9 Wäre is the epilogue |
| xcandiedoll chapter 35 . 6/9 i liked that this time it was loud mouth Naruto to say his wishes to baby Naruto. this was moving. this was a really great read, i spent a lot of hours binging it. thanks once again author-san. best regards~ |
| xcandiedoll chapter 35 . 6/9 thanks for this wonderful work! TT |
| xcandiedoll chapter 32 . 6/8 yay finally a fic where they change major things, aside from Naruto's birth! |
| xcandiedoll chapter 18 . 6/8 I liked Minato and Fugaku's dynamics. hmm i think ive read a fic before that had the same resolution regarding the council. I forgot the title, but I do remember thats one where Naruto acts like Minato's brother, Naruaki, but they openly share the knowledge about the future and act together. I think you got some inspiration there. Anyway, this story is fantastic. I liked the slow burn. Thanks for the wonderful work author-san! Will keep reading |
| Angel123456789 chapter 35 . 6/4 work of art I loved the end |
| El Publicano chapter 35 . 5/26 Hahaha, Dios, esto fue un gran placer leerlo, es la mejor historia que he leído hasta ahora, tiene de todo, me hizo reír y casi llorar, ese final fue algo... Uff que decir. Sabes, preferiría mil veces está historia al final que tuvo Shippuden con los otsutsukis esos... Pero dejando los emparejamientos finales que tuvo, NaruHina, Sasusaku,... Fue un placer leer esto. 10/10 |
| Dammi chapter 35 . 5/18 This is the best story I've ever read! |
| cherryblossomszahime chapter 35 . 5/16 This was such a rollercoaster of emotions. You did an incredible job with this. Thank you! |
| KamiOfKamis chapter 1 . 5/12 Amazing. As another comment mentioned though, you should have written an epilogue to the book, or shown some sort of future for the Naruto we saw in the book |
