Reviews for Vainglory
reys.of.sunshine16 chapter 28 . 9/13
This is probably one of the best AUs I’ve ever read. What an interesting take to write an alternative Akatsuki with Minato as its leader. Thanks for writing this gem!
radTWITCH chapter 2 . 7/21
I am so confused on what the heck is going on in this story. The synopsis says "Minato... Konohas youngest missing-nin" but from what I can gather here he already has the harashin and the moniker yellow flash so he must be in his 20s at least and still a Shinobi of Konoha so hes definitely not the youngest. I feel like this story started right in the middle instead of at the beginning.
Adelina chapter 28 . 3/7
I just finished your story and I must admit IT is one of the Best I ever read. IT is unjustly underrated and I don't see how and why? I'm just glad it's here and I has the opportunity to read it.
MosquitoesLoveMe chapter 28 . 12/10/2019
Sniff, I'm not crying, you are... Honestly, I'm really glad I found this story only now, after it was complete. I'm not sure I would have been able to handle those hiatuses, especially with some of the cliffhangers a few chapters were sporting. Thanks again Suzu, for writing and sharing this with us! These were some of the best twenty hours I wast-ahem, spent productively consuming literature. I hope you write more Minato Kushina fluff! I'd definitely read 'em. Cheers!
MosquitoesLoveMe chapter 25 . 12/10/2019
Yussss. More sap for the sap gods!
MosquitoesLoveMe chapter 19 . 12/10/2019
Satisfaction.
MosquitoesLoveMe chapter 16 . 12/9/2019
Daaaaaamn. Minato mega evolved so much, he's the leader of Akatsuki. Also someone give Nagato a hug. I've loved every minute of this story, thanks for writing this Suzu!
MosquitoesLoveMe chapter 4 . 12/8/2019
Minato is adorkable. And terrifying. Somehow I think you've captured him perfectly.
Niles chapter 13 . 9/7/2019
Sh*T! Is it going in the direction of minato the pain version?
NiGhTqUeEn chapter 8 . 9/7/2019
Danzo and obito! I hate those 2! Specially danzo! The only good thing sasuke did in Shippūden is by getting rid of this old scum!
ItsBirdie chapter 28 . 7/29/2019
Wow amazing story! I got nervous that the ending would cripple me with sadness, but now my heart is full. It's a good ending. Congratulations on getting so far and finishing your fic! The only critique would be to cut or clarify some bits, as my eyes skimmed to get to the next point in a couple of places. A story like this is an accomplishment. Loved Minato and Kushina. Loved the sap and the intrigue. Was shocked by Danzo as Yondaime when I first read it (how dare you foul the legendary Yondaime name we know, Danzo!) and I'm so happy Minato and Kushina are alive. So Naruto officially doesn't know his father? There /could/ be a very interesting unofficial sequel for that! So interesting. Thanks for this story and your dedication! It paid off
ItsBirdie chapter 25 . 7/28/2019
The sap is adequate. *thumbs up* xP I love minato and kushina.
ItsBirdie chapter 14 . 7/27/2019
AAAHHHHH. This chapter man. It was so amazing and I literally laughed out loud so many times. So entertaining.
ItsBirdie chapter 13 . 7/27/2019
I love this story but why did you have to freakin kill Jiraya? DX srsly my heart (amazing story by the way)
Guest chapter 5 . 1/26/2019
Danzou became hokage in a fair way or he killed sarutobi?
Wow he is going to abandon Minato like this I hope he fuck Danzou plan.
Danzou fucked Itachi life in canon, i hope minato don't meet a such tragic end
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