I'm am rather concerned on when the next update will be

Good story so far, but I feel like it's going a bit too fast paced.

when Naruto and ion had get to some outpost city when ninjas and others warriors meeting it and it a bar Naruto and some big black guy who was try to get ion to go with him had lost his arm when Naruto had used the Wieder on him and lost his arm and when he get it back and say if you trying it vs her you lose more then a arm pa so go home now and get a DR to help you arm MR , when doing it now , Naruto had you when his to get sex , for a book in his vest is the 1 clue ion and 2 paly cards too , maybe hot woman with big bods too, seeing it now , ok ,

quiero el capitulo 20,21,22 de esta historia

The creative story give me so much idea flowing through me, please update

Pretty good so far. I'm waiting for future chapters if there is still being created.

Dude you gotta update this you cant just leave it at sasuke about to find out I mean come on that's a mean cliffhanger

Update soon pls

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To the previous 2 reviewers. I do agree but the story is for the most part readable. I have read and enjoyed far worse. That said I love this story and can’t wait to see more. Keep up the good work

There are a metric FUCK LOAD of grammar mistakes strewn throughout this story. I suggest finding someone willing to go back through and edit or point the issues out so you can edit them yourself. It physically hurt me to read at some points, and had me rolling my eyes more than once wondering how the hell you managed to fuck that up.

That said, I relatively enjoyed reading this. Although I am more than a little annoyed at the cliffhanger you've left off on. Hopefully you'll update eventually. Naruto is a bit more than unhinged and honestly a little cringe inducing at times because of how over the top you've gone with his characterization. You could dial it back a few notches and still get across the point of how absolute his loathing of Sasgay(15 years and I still haven't found a name more fitting than that) and Sakura is. Maybe his interactions with Ino will be the start of that, I hope so because I'm getting tired of wanting to strangle the little shit over some of his actions/statements.

Anyways, I'll be keeping an eye on this to see where the next chapter leads. Interested to see how Sasuke is going to take Sakura's revelation about the real identity of 'Nuu'.

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please continue. i really want to know more. really good story keep up the good work.

I’ve been reading this story over and over since 7th grade I honestly can say that this is one of my favorite stories I have ever read and your writing has most definitely improve! I’m glad you finally updated and I hope to see more! Proud of you for keeping with it even after such a long break in time I know this fic will become one of the greats and I hope you keep the motivation and continue to enlighten us with more chapters! Thanks for the awesome fic if you ever publish a book let me know I’d definitely buy it! Welcome back!

Please update, I love it