Reviews for Beyond the Veil Volume One: Arrival
Ashkan Dehno chapter 52 . 18h
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
Jamal rarick chapter 1 . 7/7
Stan Lee... I’m not crying you’re crying
AvidReader2425 chapter 12 . 6/25
Another very enjoyable chapter,
AvidReader2425 chapter 11 . 6/24
Another excellent and enjoyable chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 10 . 6/24
Naughty kitty LOL, another really fun chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 6/21
I’m not sure why magneto expect anyone to join him when he sent someone like sabertooth after them LOL
AvidReader2425 chapter 1 . 6/21
Magneto, always butting in LOL
Kian Xki chapter 1 . 6/18
LOL

I noticed that Harry does count as a mutant, normal wizards can't talk with snakes

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Name: Raven Darkholme / Mystique
Race: Homo Superior
Mutation: Blue Skin & Shape shifting
Notes: trained in martial arts and infiltration
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Name: Charles Xavier/ Professor X
Race: Homo Superior
Mutation: Telepathy
Notes: is rich and has a DR. in genetics
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Name: James Logan / Wolverine
Race: Homo Superior
Mutation: animal instinct, Regeneration and bone Claws
Notes: all his bones are coated bones in adamantium
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Name: Harry Potter
Race: Homo Magi Superior
Mutation: Talking to Snakes
Notes: can also use magic
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Rinzler 69 chapter 1 . 6/18
That was one of the perfectly done stan lee camio i have ever read here.
Quantum qwazi chapter 45 . 2/2
So king pin would never work with hellfire because he got wayyyyyy to much ego
ChiDead chapter 52 . 11/24/2019
Onward
Vercalos chapter 12 . 9/6/2019
Huh. This chapter goes a bit odd when Peter joins Kitty, Harry, and Gwen. First, Harry wonders if Peter he recognises them as the ones that saved him from Kraven, then he recognises Peter is Spider-Man. I can't help but think that those two bits of story should be exchanged. As it is, it's logically anachronistic.
Vercalos chapter 1 . 9/5/2019
I had to grin and fight back a tear for the Stan Lee cameo.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 13 . 6/20/2019
Many Scientists like these two just show they don't seem to get what they are doing and want is wrong and is going to be their undoing many past civilizations that did what is going on now was their undoing put too many idiots refuse to learn from the mistakes of the past. IDIOTS! I have paid attention to history and learned from those mistakes of the past. Which includes that of my relatives this not doing what they did.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 9 . 6/20/2019
I don't know why our heroes didn't think to have our most powerful telepaths use their powers to turn Doom's brain into a vegetable thus making him harmless where he can never harm anyone ever again.
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