Reviews for Harry Potter and the Deus Ex Machina
Sedracus chapter 9 . 7/25
Just on chapter 9 and you have me shuddering along with the great reveal! Well written!
kase519 chapter 6 . 7/24
Bond? Really? Ok...still holding my attention
kase519 chapter 4 . 7/24
Wow. One of the better fight scenes I've read and so engaging in plot details.
kase519 chapter 3 . 7/23
I really like the Regulus
kase519 chapter 2 . 7/23
Well you have my attention
kase519 chapter 1 . 7/23
Grand experiment. Lets see how it goes.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 23 . 7/23
you have got to be kidding me. even if i'm wrong , which i don't think i am. this is going to be so AWESOME.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 22 . 7/23
interesting chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 21 . 7/23
great chapter. i enjoyed it. good work on this one.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 20 . 7/23
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. this chapter is so sweet. HARRY is such a good kid. fantastic work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 19 . 7/23
this chapter was heartwarming. i enjoyed it a lot. you did a wonderful job on this chapter...
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 18 . 7/23
nice chapter. i enjoyed it a lot. HARRY POTTER is finally free. i'm very happy. one of my greatest regrets about the HARRY POTTER series is J. K. ROWLING essentially allowing the DURSLEYS to get away with child abuse scot free & not sending them to prison. so HARRY never gets to see his childhood tormentors answer for their crimes , nor does the readers / audience get to see the DURSLEY'S pay for tormenting a child , so every time the readers remember the situation , we can't even comfort ourselves & say they are in prison. outstanding work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 17 . 7/23
i'm deeply impressed. MARIUS is really cool. i won't shed a single tear for the DURSLEYS , because although HARRY POTTER was forced on them , they didn't have to deliberately make him miserable & abuse him. there is a special circle in HELL for child abuser's. there is a reason why people have the saying PICK ON SOMEONE YOUR OWN SIZE. i feel sorry for the M. I. 6. people who had to watch all the abuse take place & not stop it. it must have hurt a lot. this chapter was fascinating. you did great work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 16 . 7/22
humans are often very complex. sometimes one of the most painful part of being human is love , loving someone despite them hurting you or someone failing to help you when you need it because of them being human. brilliant chapter. it was touching. you did a terrific just on this chapter. way to go.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 15 . 7/22
i'm having the feels man , i'm having the feels . astounding chapter. i'm enjoying it. you know it's easy to HATE [ HATE is sadly an easy emotion for humans to feel ] , but it's hard to be understanding & to forgive. you did an AMAZING job on this chapter.
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