How are you gonna make him say dattebayo so much but forget that Kurama calls him ningen all the time

There are very powerful genjutsu most people cannot use due to the chakra cost. Tobirama made one and I think there are many others. Also, the one Tobirama made whose name I forget not only required a lot of chakra to cast but also a crap ton constantly to maintain it.

Maybe if the bijuu introduced themselves instead of acting like weapons they would have been respected as some sort of powerful spirits instead. And they’ve been weapons for only about a century. The rest of the time they were ignored or caused devastation and then are surprised people saw them as just mindless monsters.

It’s not a “last name” in Japanese culture, it’s a family or clan name. You don’t automatically take you’re husband’s name when clans are involved. For example, Minato had no clan so even if his marriage to Kushina was public he would still just be “Namikaze” and his children would just be “Uzumaki”. Even if he has a clan this wouldn’t change due to how prestigious the Uzumaki clan was. Had their own village and even their own freaking nation. No clan could outclass them and so the only way for Kushina or her children to take his name would be through negotiations (if he’d had a clan to negotiate memberships and such).

This is also why Naruto is still “Uzumaki” and his children are in the Bolt series and not “Namikaze”. They are the Uzumaki clan.

I don’t understand why people think clans would be willing to have nearly zero growth rate do to half their population marrying out of the clan and the other half marrying into it or something. No. You either marry into the clan or you’re clan lover cannot marry you unless there is political work to get significant benefits for the clan in exchange for letting said lover marry out of the clan.

Naruto will learn seals?

Oh and by the way, when every single character yells for no apparent reason, it reduces their collective intelligence and maturity to less than that of a 9 year old.
Propel who have no business yelling and active like bafoons include but are not limited to: Iruka, Hiruzen, & Almost any Jonin.

Why is this fanfiction 5% what I came for and 95% yuri and cringe? Not only do Satsuki and Hinata get more action than Naruto, but anytime something happens to develop his relationships with them, it happens when he's "Naruko." I have a physical aversion to reading the majority of this story and am sorely disappointed at the pour quality in which such and interesting idea was expouneded upon. Not only are the interactions between characters dry and repetitive, there is also little to no character development. The appitomy of change in this fanfiction is Hinata, and even she has made minimal changes. Naruto still fights with his head full of mud, he still easily falls within the fifth percentile of IQ scores, and for all the power he has supposedly gained, not a single aspect of the story has substantially due to that strength or development. Once again, an overall good concept was butchered either because of the low skill level of the writers, or because the story was poorly planned out and horribly executed.

no offense of course but i finnally found some super long fanfiction with fem sasuke but i hate naruto paired with hinata :((

Are you a flat Earther? cause the sun doesn't spin around the Earth.

Wow... This is awesome that your still writing this amazing story.
Keep up the awesome work and stay safe.

So this has been good so far although i still think that personally just naruto sasuki would have been better but that's personal preference and the three way does seem to be working for you so far...also Wave huh? Super original xd

Please have a oc pair with Samui

I kind of wished you update this story once in 2 week

this shit is weird wtf

you know, It also makes sense that Sasuke is female, pretending to be male in Cannon too, it would explain why he has a hard time getting attached to anyone because he's lying to them, which means he can't build bonds yet calls whatever half-baked friendship he made a bond and fails to see what makes bonds so powerful.

because he is actually a she, her father doesn't pay attention to her, and because he is a she Itachi wishes to keep her as innocent as possible, refusing to train her.

and when she goes to orochimaru, she is completely cut off from whatever healing she could receive, and thus begins fighting with herself under every other situation, which is probably why she is as combative as can be.

the existence of sarada could be explained easily by either Tsunade (who can make a genuine limb), or the much darker route of Sasuke actually undergoing an operation to make herself into a male biologically thus making his innermost battle of genders even worse by adding male hormones on top of the problem.

it's an interesting thinking exercise if nothing else