It's baaaaaaaack!

66..

Jahahah It's been a long since I saw a "destroying the world" kinda declaration. sadly this fic is abandoned so no ending...

I hope in the end this story is happy. I’m glad Naruto only killed the leaf nin in self defense altho it’s still bad. He’s still not as bad as Sasuke was though. Gosh I hope things turn out well in this story.

I’m dying lol the pressure to ship! It’s an important part of life that I don’t know why you’re avoiding? I mean no one even in the background has had any Romance except in IchaIcha? But *holds hands up* I don’t need Naruto to date anyone. I want him to discover karin’s Uzumaki connection asap. Maybe they’re distant cousins. Anyway... I’m interested in his decision to remake the world. Personally I don’t like it when anyone tries to do such a thing... but we’ll see. I can’t believe Itachi is back! Hope he gets to pass on his information. Also... who became hokage? I’m dumb. It should’ve been Jiraiya so he could get rid of that dang Danzo and find out that itachi is the shadow. Ugh! But i get that he’s suffering over what he lost and what he had to do. Everything is so complicated!

Too bad Hinata isn’t with him to heal Kakashi. Also dang obito WHY? No take-baskys! Also I can’t even believe how relieved i feel that Naruto decided not to coldly abandon his village right now. To see all this and walk away... I shudder.

You say it won’t be a ship fic but more people need to come to matter to him. Fast.

It gave me the creeps when he thought Temari was pretty even though she is! But I want him to like girls. He already liked one when he was 12 in canon... I don’t want him to be interested in Karin or necessarily shy but he was unnecessarily mean to her. anyway. I loved the battle with Kakashi and Naruto. I can’t see anywhere that it fell short.

A bit rough?! Dude, this entire chapter was beautiful! The standard you're aiming for must be astronomically high!

Did I read it correctly that Tobi was carrying a bundle, Mayu perhaps? To try to turn her against him? I’m so sad that Shirakumo and Rai died. I’m interested in Sai perhaps being on their side. I’m also interested in Jiraiya perhaps helping Naruto overcome his misery...

No! No no. It’s so sad! Rai shouldn’t die. Mayu isn’t dead yet if it hasn’t been confirmed but I know she might be. And we found out Naruto might’ve killed Mayu’s mom too... who actually wasn’t as cold hearted toward him as she seemed... ahhh how will we ever recover from this?

Excuse me who doesn’t like the OCs? Shame on them! That’s just prejudice against original characters you’ve done a fantastic job with all of them!

To me 98% of this site is filled with garbage. This is the only fic I look to read. Its the only one worth reading. You breath life into characters that resonates emotion to the reader. You know what I mean its why you write the way you do.

BTW your OCs deserve to have proper official artwork commissioned by now including your Naruto of course. Maybe the 3 of them by the campfire? They were short lived but they lived with conviction to the end.

What was the word mouthed by Myu?

Great to see an update, fantastic chapter as usual. Stay safe - looking forward to your next chapter!

I have to hand it to you, you’re a deft writer. When you first revealed that the nine tails had come out I tried to think back for any clues. I couldn’t remember any until you revealed it in this chapter—the caretaker’s death. I did get an eerie feeling at the time about that but it never occurred to me that he/kyubi killed it! Love all the background info we’re getting!