she is stronger than she was in the first Naruto, but she does not have any fundamental changes since she would not really be Hinata otherwise. Plus even if he did return her feelings it could not actually go anywhere, I feel that all those stories where they fall in love and get married are actually pretty unrealistic (aside from the fact that it happens within the span of five seconds). While the manga does not up and say it, the fact that every Hyuuga looks like every other Hyuuga means that they practice inbreeding (Incest), as heir to the Hyuuga clan Hinata would never be allowed to marry outside of said clan (plus the elders would never allow the Byakugan to belong to another clan

Merci pour l'histoire

So why didn't anybody answer hinata's questions? OR naruto's? BOTH were very much valid... And Tsunade and clan heads obviously aren't getting the entire story! (which is very, very bad in positions like this). Also who cares what kabuto said or did? He was a gennin, they were ordered by a jounin to stay there, they effectively "ignored orders", "abandoned post", "maimed one clan heir" and "inadvertently(maybe, since they still aren't telling the whole truth) led to the death of another"and potentially "jeopardized the entire village", "committed high treason", "aided an enemy during combat"... All of which are some pretty serious outright crimes! And what's the point of continuing to warn hiruzen of anything? The guy is about as dumb as you can possbily be and still be able to live! And is so cowardly that he should have earned the title "yellow hokage". The civilians giving a "pass" to the uchiha I can kinda see, but not the shinobi...I agree with kurama, just get rid of the uchiha already! (I don't understand why naruto didn't already) He's already had one "extra" friend die this time around, what's he waiting on? A "higher body count"?

So tsunade got to call Hiashi a coward... THAT was the terms just stated, and he refused... So he's a coward and the clan won't be doing higher then d-ranks for quite a while... Hiashi has now "tainted" the hyuuga name himself! (who cares about his explanations... The characters all act like everyone around them should somehow be their therapist, but it's not "their problem"... Grow a set and take a little self-responsibility.)

One thing with tsunade seeing hate, anger and disgust on the elders faces and knowing naruto will "take care of it", it's not right to want him to "fix" everything, they screwed it all up after all, and she (and the two hokages) should be "fixing" this now, not waiting for naruto to do it.. He's "only one person" and waiting on him to fix everything, all alone is kinda what started this whole mess isn't it? (even with shino, naruto had to do his own job, and two other big jobs, PLUS the jounnin's jobs too?.. How incompetent are these people?)

I did notice one disturbing trend inn all your stories, you always give naruto some way of getting the sharringan, but if the uchiha are a "cursed clan" and those are "cursed eyes", then isn't naruto himself cursing his own clan/self?... Seems kinda backward thinking... You need to pick another doujutsu for him to have. "rinnegan, (but not rinne-sharringan), ranmaru's unnamed one, the 'blood eye', 'dragon's eye' " anyone BUT that one. It always kinda made me scratch my head.

One of the main things I can't figure out on this story, WHY do you keep keeping the antagonists ALIVE?.. Negji, sasuke, sakura, danzo (for quite a while), hiruzen, elders who should have no say... WHY? Shouldn't THEY be the ones to die FIRST?! Wouldn't that make a lot more sense? Seems to me, without the BACKBONE of the problems in the future.. there wouldn't BE a problem.. Also the chapter... "punishment"? HOW? Nobody got punished!... Hiashi didn't get anything but "a stern talking to" which you have now done for AT LEAST 6-7 chapters... sasuke got fired (which is ESSENTIALLY put back in the academy) which YOU ALREADY did... NOBODY had any kind of punishment AT ALL.

Permanently seal their chakra, SEAL THEM, throw em' in prison for ever, kill em', maim them, DESTROY their clans... THOSE are punishments... What you did is a slap on the wrist and "bad boy" speech. A thief used to get their HAND CHOPPED OFF... (just for stealing)... THAT'S PUNISHMENT! The elders? CUT OUT THEIR TONGUES..

I'm very confused, YOU GOT ALL THIS OUT IN THE FIRST CHAPTER... How do they act like they didn't know? EVERYTHING has already been stated SEVERAL TIMES in EVERY CHAPTER!

DUDE you have been addressing ALL of that for 13 chapters by now... EVERYONE knew who naruto was AFTER THE FIRST CHAPTER... THEY KNEW MITO AND HIRASHIMA AND NARUTO'S LINK AND ALL OF IT FROM THE JUMP! GET OVER IT! Redoing it here, AGAIN is just getting really redundant! It's been spelled OUT several times ALREADY! The people (and clans) of konoha HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE to claim ignorance since CHAPTER 1! That ship done sailed... NOW IT'S ALL MALICE and HATE! Which makes ENTIRELY NO SENSE on most of them!

"partially" hiruzen's fault? PARTIALLY? How about COMPLETELY his fault?! HE EMPOWERED the elders, HE ALLOWED people to hurt naruto, HE HID EVERYTHING from everyone, HE allowed the academy to be changed, HE didn't set guards worth a shit for naruto, HE ALLOWED danzo to get away with treason OVER AND OVER, HE put the teams together, HE let orochimaru live, HE can't keep a secret to save his soul, HE made the "civilian council" and HE is the one that opened his BIG MOUTH in the first place about naruto! I'd say EVERYTHING wrong in the village FALLS SQUARELY on his shoulders! He's a complete and total SCREW-UP! "partially" his fault?.. My left butt-cheek.

Have children? In the LEAF? HAHHAHAA.. LOL... Um... NO... I couldn't think of a WORSE shit-pit to have kids in... That just WOULDN'T happen! Maybe spring country.. But most assuredly NOT leaf. It's ridicules to even CONSIDER. It's a hell-hole for ages 12 and up exclusively. HAHA it's funny you even brought it up!

Well nobody in their RIGHT MINDS are gonna attack the village now! The first and second hokages in regenerating bodies with UNLIMTED chakra, naruto and Jiriya in the village as two SAGES, naruto with the rinnegan and Tsunade back... Konoha is stronger then it's EVER BEEN in all of history (I thought this was supposed to be "darkest time")..

You gotta quit keeping sasuke alive just to give naruto pump-ups... HE DOESN'T NEED EM'... He's already got basically the powers of a god... He doesn't need MORE. (he should be able to wipe his nose with the akatsuki at this point).

Why weren't hinata's and naruto's questions heard? Seems to me those are more IMPORTANT! And why no chakra sealing? Can't naruto see that everything is PRETTY MUCH going the exact same way as it did before (slightly sped up) DOES HE WANT A REPEAT? GET RID OF THEM ALREADY! (should have done so long ago!)

What I don't get is that hiruzen is still harping on that "test", it was STUPIDLY OBVIOUS to anyone (and I DO MEAN ANYONE) with a working brain cell... TEAMS ARE ALWAYS THREE PERSON... And kakashi made it GLARINGLY CLEAR what was needed! All one would have to do, is live in the village for ANY amount of time (thus seeing it) and use VERY BASIC deduction skills that can be found even in DOGS! Shouldn't hiruzen be MORE concerned that apparently he was LIED to by even the instructors.. That sasuke and sakura AREN'T "top of the class", they are in-fact COMPLETE, incompetent MORONS! and EVIL MORONS to boot... I'd be more worried about THAT, if I were him! The fact that EVERYTHING, every single institution of the entire village.. Has been corrupted to COMPLETE USELESSNESS! All while he "watched".

You don't NEED sasuke to bait obitedo... NOW THAT EVERYONE knows who he "REALLY" is.. just bait him with that stupid over-inflated Uchiha ego! He's quite EASY to actually get steaming mad... Naruto SHOULD have killed sasuke BEFORE the chunin exams.. SERIOUSLY what's he waiting on? History to repeat itself?

Actually nageto only died using the seventh path because he BROUGHT BACK AN ENTIRE VILLAGE... Naruto should be able to bring back one at a time as long as he spaces it. And why is sasuke still sucking air? Shino only died because naruto WOULDN'T DO, WHAT HE CAME BACK TO DO! Sasuke and the elders SHOULD HAVE DIED DAY 1!

Next chapter expect akatsuki? We've ALREADY SEEN THEM! (so, not impressive) Besides they have YEARS AND YEARS before they can even USE the kyuubi... AGAIN seems worthless to come after naruto! And if naruto keeps interrupting them and stopping them from getting jinchuriki then pretty much they can NEVER use him! I think you "glossed over" too much... LAND OF SNOW, LAND OF BIRDS, LAND OF SEA, LAND OF FLOWERS, WATERFALL VILLAGE...Your straight skipping them ALL (and they are actually what matter.. That's how naruto gets known throughout the world, this high-school drama crap at konoha doesn't REALLY matter!) Lemme put it another way: Nobody outside this village, gives a crap if konoha lives, or burns at dawn... And as too sasuke? If he's executed as a traitor or some "random-of-the-street-nobody" puts a kunai through his skull? NOBODY else in the ENTIRE ELEMENTAL NATIONS gives a flying fig!

Not a great accomplishment... the "civilian council" is ONLY TWO.. so what the fuck dude?... "disbanding two"? The ELDERS GOTTA GO (which I see no sense in why they weren't killed instantly). Your WHOLE primise is wrong. Kushina and minato were LIMITED time constitutes... so why not KILL THEM ALL? What possible side effects were they gonna have? EVERYONE IS KILLED and the killers ARE DEAD, vanish into the either. I dunno why you DRAG it out to make naruto's nightmare come true... JUST SHUT IT ALL DOWN.. early!