Do you know the way?

Dang, this was one of the best One Piece and Naruto crossovers yet. While I’m sad you’ve stopped updating, I’m glad youre still writing though!

For the love of sanity people you authors need to start using flash drives to save all your work.

soooo naruto just gives out information about his abilities...

HE'S USING TECHNIQUES FROM 3 OF MY FAVORITE ONE PIECE CHARACTERS ALL TOGETHER! I am geeking the FUCK out right now!

As I said, sasuke is NOT WORTH THE EFFORT! If he was DROWNING, all he should be thrown is an ANCHOR! If he is ON FIRE the only liquid used to put him out, should be LIGHTER FLUID! I mean think about it, "oh yes, lets give the head-case nihilist a deadly tai jutsu style", "what could POSSIBLY go wrong with that plan?". Also after how he acted in the arena? He shouldn't even be a NINJA anymore! An assassination technique on a colleague, over a TEMPER TANTRUM, in FRONT OF ALL THE DIGNITARIES?! in-excusable no matter his last name! It just shows how UNPROFESSIONAL the leaf is, and it shows that the hokage HAS NO CONTROL over his own people! No, it's a BIG BLACK EYE to the leaf! Plus he took off after the suna nins WITHOUT ORDERS(still not sure how he was even CONSCIOUS), effectively ABANDONING HIS POST in the middle of an invasion! Then BECOMING NOTHING BUT A LIABILITY against garaa..ENOUGH IS ENOUGH wouldn't you say? I KNOW danzo would have him drawn and quartered JUST for that abandoning one! Let alone his humiliating the leaf!

HOW is sasuke STILL pursuing the suna? Shouldn't he be out like a light? I mean naruto knocked him UNCONSCIOUS TWICE! Not just MINUTES AGO! (oh and RIPPED OUT HIS HEART) He's like a damn cock-roach, he just won't DIE! But seriously there is NO WAY he could have recovered already, he doesn't have a healing factor like naruto. And temari SHOULD have beaten him half to death EASILY! Like LAUGHINGLY easy. (she's had longer to rest then even he has and she should have been holding back before, knowing about the invasion) I personally think it's DUMB that people keep either saving sasuke or sparing him, HE'S NOT WORTH THE TROUBLE! Let his arrogance and stupidity and ego, cost him the ULTIMATE PRICE!(because saving and sparing him only FEEDS his ego! You cannot teach humility to the chronically stupid! and his "ambition"?.. Which one? Killing his brother, destroying konoha for wiping out the uchiha, or bringing eternal peace 'aka death' to the entire world? See? He's a NUTCASE, needs killed off.)

So naruto has to fight: Negji, suigetsu, sasuke THEN garaa? Don't you think that's a touch overdone? I mean come on there is only supposed to be ONE fight per person, that was the whole reason for the semi-finals before.

One thing I always thought was BIZARRE with suna, who picks a fight when you have the WEAKEST tailed beast? Also your the SMALLEST village? That's like walking up in the prison yard to the biggest dude with the largest crew and sucker punching him in the mouth when your a 100 lbs soaking wet with NOBODY! Or bringing a knife to a death match where your opponent has a full loaded AK-47...THAT'S A DEATH WISH! I get the wind diaymo was dirty dealing them, but that would have been MUCH better handled through negotiations (god knows the leaf can use LESS missions.. Their security sucks BALLS) I'd say the leaf NEEDS a 20-30% stop to ALL missions.. (they REALLY DON'T NEED that much money and they NEED more manpower.. FAR MORE from letting two ARMIES walk in shows me anything, then a zombie invasion, pein attack, etc.. I'd say cut mission by as much as 50%.. or even MORE. SCREW the civilians, they want money? Tell them to go do it, and don't make it a REQUEST).. Divert ALL monetary income to "defense" and tell the civilian "council" to "eat a dick"... MARTIAL LAW!

Great story I really liked it.

good story just...some things that I have to point out. firstly, Naruto's personality change, that was rather abrupt don't you think? All he did was find some treasure and all of a sudden he's Mr "play boy"...really?

And the gender bend of Seigustu (mind the spelling)...no just...no

Kyuubi calling Naruto "kit" why? Really, why? let's be honest here for a second, at this point Kurama would like nothing more than to destroy everything Naruto holds dear and use his bones as a tooth pick fate having levelled the village into a smoking crater...but he's calling him "kit"...acting all buddy buddy with him...

Everything else with the story is gold but so far, to me, those few things up there are really killing your story for me

I wonder if there is a supply of Shanks' West Blue Saki on that boat... I'm sure that Gamabunta or Tsunade would enjoy such a thing.

There's no such thing as writer's block! Only deadlines! Deadlines people! DEADLINES! At least that's what my author friend said. Worked for my dissertation.

love the not preachiness. I try to skip that crap in super long pic but usually it's too important to the plot

I have to ask if Naruto could use two fruits safely a Logia(not sure which would be best for him maybe the Ice-Ice or Magma fruit) and a Paramecium Fruit(I'm thinking Jewelry Bonnie's fruit the Ageing fruit. I mean just think use the fruit on the Sandaime to remove about 30-40 years of his age and he might have had a better time against Orochimaru. Then there's what's his bucket Kisame use it on him and you have two options making him an infant again, or ageing him into an old man, or you can do that to Itachi, then launch a fist of Lava at Kisame and see if his sword survives the confrontation.