I DON'T CARE WHO COMES IN NARUTO'S HAREM BUT HINATA SHOULD ALWAYS BE THE ONE NARUTO LOVES AND CARES FOR THE MOST. NARUHINA FOREVER

What the fuck is this trash. Kiba? lol

Not a bad premise but felt lacking somehow, by the time I got to the end I was just ready to move on. 5/10

Why would he care if she slept with another woman is that really so bad it's not like she got knocked up by the neighbor
But then i can't imagine hating people simply cause there choice in sexual partner so idk the lesbia hate just feels inherently false cause I don't think people feel negatively towards lesbians I'd say it's the opposite tho
Their just people ya know anyway just putting it out that I don't think it fits in well with the story theirs people controlling minds bad ass demon britches epic wars love drama and homophobia it just might be one thing too many to squeeze in or maybe ,y suspension of disbelief towards the ability for people to act in such a manner takes away from it I mean the story is awesome an all just ya know

Come back, bro. I miss you. (

Bro I need you to bring this thing back son it’s definitely one of my favorites on this site

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Yeah sorry I draw the line at yandere Hinata. Nope just nope

More please. This is too good.

When I started reading this fic, I thought it was kind of boring and off the wall in kind of a bad way, but I read black cloaks, red clouds and loved it, so I continued reading this one figuring it was gonna get better and better the further I went. And I've got to say I enjoyed this fic so far. I'm so drawn into the side story lines as well as the main one, and you keep me guessing at what is next every chapter. I hope you continue to write this fic and possibly even return to black cloaks, red clouds, cause they are both really good and massively underrated.

Great story, but I think you are making each chapter too large; on average you seem to write around 7,000 words a month for this story alone..but you post once in a blue moon.

I honestly didn't enjoy reading this far like it's not badly written but just blah full of tropes and tbh kinda bs plot devices like Sakura in rain of the "projection" and imos dad dying off for really no reason. It feels like a waist.

I can't deny my excitement when Psycho Hinayana came back, this is definetly the most immersive Naruto Fanfic I've ever read.

Ino forgot that the karmic wheel is gonna keep on turning.

Great work here. Welcome back. Very interested to see what direction this goes in. Keep up the awesomeness!