Just a note, you misgendered Tenten. Otherwise,

LOVE
AND
RAINBOWS
TO
YOU
FOR
SUCH
AMAZING
WRITING

PFFT POOR SAKUMO
AND KAKASHI, YOU PRANSTRESS

BLECH, LOSERS! MISSING OUT ON SUCH A GREAT IDEA.
I mean, sure, you have some wrong words and all that, but who doesn't? What, do they expect you to be perfect? I've read MUCH worse than this, so whoever complains about this better try and write their own and see how well that goes.
GO AUTHOR!

I've never understood sealing and stuff, like how does specifics matter when no language is a universal law or anything like that, like shouldn't sealing work by intent rather then the meaning of the made up written language?

Oh, tell your brother about clown fish. xD

This story is more of a rant then a story. You use political terms such as "sexist" while there has been no inclination of women being discriminated in the Ninja world. Something must have happened in your real life for you to write this shitty story.

There is no problem with gender and sexuality in Konoha.
Look at Gai for heaven's sake. Tsunade became the Hokage, and no one did a shit about it. It's because the Ninja culture is about prioritizing the strongest.

You fucked up a bit when you had Minato interfer.
Should have just had him beat them up as a show of power.

A cliffhanger agh this story was amazing I cried so much. I cannot believe Sakura died because of Gaara, I know I shouldn’t be wanting the to go after Gaara but at the same time I want to punch him myself.

i love your writing. its so easy to read, and its so flowing. and your storyline is awesome and honestly? good job (:

Now I'm kinda weird, I guess
I can't tell what gender what sexual orientation I am or anything for my gender I just don't care (so I just go with my sex) and for sexual orientation I don't get a sexual want from anyone I don't think I've ever loved anyone. I'm fine with never getting with anyone and I joke about becoming a sage by being a virgin till I'm 40. But I guess the joke is that I'm completely fine with that and I can't tell if it's my apathetic depression talking or myself. I'm slowly believing that my apathy is who I am but I've never known anything else.(genetic depression/ apathy at a young age)

Honestly, your grammar is relatively better than a lot of other people I know. You only make minor and common errors, which can be fixed with a beta, or through experience.

On another note, I completely and utterly love all the creativity that has gone into this story so far. Your story portrays how the world doesn't always go the way you want it to.

I love how this story shows how little things that we often take for granted -such as our gender- should really be valued, and we're lucky to be, well, ourselves.

i’m tired of crying during all these damn chapters! but god i love them too

I love them so much, thank you for writing this! I really hope you continue !

I'm really bummed that you killed off sakura...like dang...it's been interesting reading your story as I usually just don't continue reading these types since its hard to picture myself in the main character's position. Thanks for the story!