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Me encanta tu fanfiction .
Por suerte te encontré ya que me encanta esta pareja desde que vi a Azula .
Siempre he creído que Azula haría una gran pareja con Sokka.

I started reading this story acouple months ago and have loved every second of it and can hardly wait for the next chapter keep up the amazing work.

good chapter

Damn Toph was kinda being a bit of a bitch this chapter huh. Eh whatever I'll keep reading good shit so far tho.

Honestly top 5 favorite stories on here. You just manage to hook me in on each arc where I don't want to do anything but read. Can't wait to see what happens now with Renkai knowing for sure what's happening between them.

Sokka pissing off Azula (in a good way) is giving me life during this pandemic. lmaooo

I love that you incorporated the Fire Nation messenger hawks into this fic because of how much Sokka likes them. Besides, he can start sending Azula little love letters and probably guess how embarrassed Azula would be based on how quick she comes on Xin Long to whoop Sokka's ass. ;)

I also like the snippet with Shoji because we don't get to see him all that much outside of the Grand Royal Dome. What is not to love about Shoji? Bends the rules. Total gossip. Enjoys their job. Super smart.

I don't know if Shoji will get a love interest later on, but I think it would be pretty cool. Azula would be expecting Shoji's attention; and here Shoji is with his elbows on the counter, cradling his head and thinking about his love interest. Oh! And then Sokka could say something like, "That is what Azula looks like when she thinks of me." I think that would be funny. But, to be honest, though, I don't think Sokka will find it funny being burned to ashes after blurting that out. Lol

I like how youthful yet wise you made Aang in this chapter. I appreciate that Aang is still the same airhead (get it?) as he is in canon. Gyatso was essentially like a father to him, so it is understandable that he is overcome with grief. Luckily, Aang has Katara to comfort him because going to the remnants of the Southern Air Temple was traumatic. Granted, we meet Momo in this chapter, but it was a smart move to leave Momo in the Air Temple. It would have been pretty difficult for Momo to acclimate to the Southern Water Tribe.

Interestingly, though, Katara does not mention Sokka all that often in this chapter. I remember the scene from the last couple of Southern Water Tribe chapters that Katara would wait outside in the frigid cold waiting for Sokka to return home. Another thing I am on the edge of my seat by is waiting for Aang and Katara to team up to take out the Fire Nation settlement. The attack was alluded to in the previous Southern Water Tribe chapter, and I would guess that the tribe would feel hopeful again once that the settlement is destroyed.

I don't know if I mentioned this before, but I like how you include chapters like these because it gives me a break from what is going on in the main story. Also, I look forward to the possibility for everyone to cross paths with each other.

This is a very good story but I can’t help but wonder why they have to separate for a years this chapter basically has the gang all together so why leave for a whole year, they could be revealing and planning on how to end the war and take down the firelord and have azula takeover. But whatever that’s just my thoughts if I’m wrong just tell me about what you think. All in all it’s a very good story and can’t wait to see where it leads.

It shows a lot of growth for Azula to do the right thing. She’s deathly afraid of losing her father’s favor, so I thought it was awesome that she stood up for Lo and Li. Granted, Lo and Li didn’t help Azula out when she needed them after the argument with that Captain, but at least that didn’t waver her impartiality. Regardless, though, this was the first time she stood up to Ozai for her entire life. She was probably really scared of the potential consequences, but it still shows how much she has grown ever since Sokka came into her life.

I thought Ozai’s trials were going to be a lot like the Salem Witch Trials (I don’t know if you’re familiar with this historical reference [nerd alertand Ozai would just go off the rails and start accusing everyone of being a traitor to the Fire Nation. Who knows, though? Maybe he’ll get more paranoid as the story goes on. Lol

So, I'm enjoying this story so far but to be honest I don't dare to continue.
I made the mistake of going to tumblr and reading spoilers and I basically ended with a lot of questions.
This may be presumptuous but can I ask a few things?
First, this is a huge story, so I need to know, there will be rape? I abhor the mere mention of it and I don't think I can read one story where it happen to the main characters.
The second question is related to the first, I read Azula will marry Zhao and I seriously doubt she will care much about him, so again, rape? (Because if she force herself to sleep with him for whatever reason I'll still see it as rape)
Again, sorry to ask you here but dislike tumblr (though I may give it a try) and sexual violence is one topic that I can rarely tolerate.

Sokka retelling their story was really fun as well as Zuko and Azula's time together. Katara's disbelief about Azula's good qualities was very fitting.
Loved Sokka and Azula's scene at the end.

Well this really was a break out in terms of quality
Really well done, thoroughly enjoyable, especially the confession, and that moment from the comic art you did an age ago but I couldn't find.

This is one of your best yet.

As for Renkai... Well a lot can happen at Sea... Especially in Cursader Kings level politics...

Only half way through the chapter at this point and after all that, I think I know EXACTLY what's about to happen.

hehe

420

nice

Wait what will happen to that spy? This was a good chapter overall and I really enjoyed how it flowed.