Man... if this fic was edited, it would be very good. As it is, it's between decent and barely tolerable. It's too bad, honestly. It's not like there are major plot or characterization issues; it just needs to be looked over and edited somewhat.

super

you may have skipped a few things like how harry got a ship :P

If Harry's been in there for years or even decades shouldn't he be like ueber powerful by now, not like a god but fending of dementors with little to no difficulty.

Loved this story, I hope you will make a sequel, like the group going on earth (Harry Potter) or make à sequel with another fandom, like starcraft or mass effect for exemple, where they encounter the others races and are involved in their story.

Good overall. The superman red sun versus yellow sun thing is interesting, but well most light is a huge mix of frequencies. Red or Yellow would just predominate. Yellow is not even that far from red in the mix, and visible light is a tiny part anyway. I wish I could suggest some better explanation, but, well the canon back story here just doesn't fit any reasonable science.

More specifically to the story. Them meeting in the phantom zone works. I'm not sure Clark showing up helped much, but it didn't really hurt either. I'm a bit surprised you didn't make this Harry a more canon Harry originally. It might have fit better.

Also, why have Harry have all the abilities outside of magic? His magic was likely enough for this story.

Finally, thanks for writing..

Is there a sequel to this story?

I like the story... but your grammar and punctuation is horrendous.

pretty cool fic! you really threw me a curve when they ended up in the past after leaving the phantom zone. a lot of fun anyway though :)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)

nice story i like it
though i wonder why harry never thought about saving his parents/sirius/remus/or the rest of his friends
and killing voldemort
not really to save the wizarding world but to give another (possible) harry a better life

"he summoned his full power" Why the hell was he not using his full power to begin with? That line alone makes me hate this fight scene, and the entire story is riddled with illogical cliches like that. 75% of what happens in this story doesn't make any sense.

nice start

Hmm, I really enjoyed this fic. There were a few minor errors, like switching he/she in a few places and a few other things, but overall really good.

Really..? a life story info dump. Come on!

Hum, a future where Harry is with Kara, Lara, and Alura?