| Reviews for Herald of Death Book Two: Rebirth |
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   Voltrike92 chapter 1 . 6/3/2019 This story is trash |
| Daniel the War-T chapter 15 . 4/2/2019 The law of averages is non-existent though |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 35 . 10/15/2013 Just great...if things were not already messed up enough in HP/DC verse, you now are going towards a HP/DC/Marvel verse, and you brought in Harry's evil twin. Karen is going to not give you any more tit flashes! |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 31 . 10/15/2013 Those names make it seem like it is The Sisterhood. |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 30 . 10/15/2013 Well, Alex and Downfall are different people. Doesn't downfall work for Checkmate? If so, why is she saying there is a problem when Checkmate goons took Indy Go? |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 27 . 10/15/2013 Clark is too easily manipulated. |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 23 . 10/14/2013 More baddies enter onto the stage that already has so many I think the stage is going to collapse. |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 21 . 10/14/2013 So, Harry is going to breed all of the Kryptonian women he can? Sounds like a good job. |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 20 . 10/14/2013 Checkmate just messed up, because Harry was leaving them alone...now he is going to clear the world of them. |
| highlander348 chapter 35 . 10/12/2013 The ending was somewhat confusing but still good. I just wish you would have added some reader suggestions that were quite funny and provocative. Like Clark being spanked by his mother or one of his protectors. There are a lot of good spanking stories on fanfiction. Maybe being forced by Lara to have sex with her also. I liked the female domination of Clark but Harry got a lot of the screen time. Maybe if Harry was dominated at some points by his harem I would have like this even more. Such is life. |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 14 . 10/11/2013 Besides the book, there is the matter of the stones. We also have the issue of the last Heralds' container that the group has forgotten about which has the last part of the map and keys for whatever the Heralds need to retrieve. |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 13 . 10/11/2013 Is the AI Lara being pushed into Clone Lara? |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 12 . 10/11/2013 Well, Tonks got the book...but is she working for the side of Harry or another? |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 11 . 10/11/2013 This is like a bad game of pool when someone makes a great break...but puts too many balls bouncing around the table. |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 10 . 10/11/2013 We keep reading the reference to the "Savior of Kandor", are they talking about Zod or whom? |
