Reviews for Delta's Drabbles: Naruto
Shining Batista chapter 4 . 11/14/2019
You have some really interesting concept; this one is my favourite (although the imaginary friend one is a disturbingly close second).

Usually I don't like time travel fics much. Mostly because there is a severe lack of variety.
It's understandable: aside from the 'Fourth War lost, let's fix this' kind, time travelling in NARUTO is pretty difficult - given that there's basically no information about other time periods - so it's bound to happen.

Anyways, a Kurama who goes back in time by himself is intriguing. The problem with most time travel stories is that Naruto - or whoever in his place - becomes too strong too early and the plot gets screwed or simply bland.
But Kurama? He ALREADY is monstrously powerful. That's way simpler to implement in the grand scheme of things.

Also, I CRAVE a romance between Kurama and a female Naruto... Honestly, I'd even take a platonic relationship at this point.
Besides female Naruto pairings in the first place are basically: Sasuke, Itachi, male Naruto and a tiny bit of Gaara.
So, yeah. I'm not quite an "originality snob" as you so well put it, but Hell if I'm not tired of this monotony.

Well, good job. I enjoyed this, thanks.
HashtagJustMonika chapter 4 . 9/23/2019
lol that omake was hilarious:)
HashtagJustMonika chapter 6 . 9/23/2019
I really love this idea:)
HashtagJustMonika chapter 7 . 9/23/2019
Okay this is hilarious and awesome:)
Gabrielus Prime chapter 3 . 6/30/2019
You know, the Japanese have their own "tree spirits" the THEIR mythology... The "Kodama" or "Forest Children" are pretty much the same thing, just taking form as kids instead of beautiful women...
BattleshipFusou chapter 7 . 10/7/2018
Aside from Aki raising Naruto, this is probably my favorite of your little snippets/plot bunnies.
NightBringer325 chapter 8 . 6/14/2018
this would make for a very interesting story poor poor jedi have no idea what they are dealing with and really I can actually see her challenge one of them to enter her mind and see why she is so angry while Kurama makes sure that they cant leave until they have seen everything Aki wants them to it would probably break more jedi than most sith techniques if they didn't try to commit suicide first. other than that I love how Qui-Gon accurately guessed the Force had a sense of humor even if he is the victim of it thanks to Obi-Wan.
SamuelthegreatOO chapter 1 . 4/2/2018
You should do this 100%
BattleshipFusou chapter 8 . 1/14/2018
Alas poor Jedi, never can you comprehend the fact that it’s normal to be angry, even as angry as Ali was at that moment sometimes. It’s angry! It is therefore a threat! I’m not harping on your writing EDelta, that was an awesome little snip, I’m just musing on the idiocy of Jedi in general.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/18/2017
All of this is very interesting.. But i keep coming back fot the last one because its soo gooodddd!
sandmanwake chapter 1 . 11/17/2017
I'm imagining Kurama doing a Jiraiya type intro dance after someone asks him who he was and why there are two Kyuubis.

"From the East to the West, the mere mention of my name has women shedding their panties and men wanting to be me! The eldest child of the Sage of Six Paths! Accept no substitutes! The one, the only..."
cementCANOE chapter 7 . 9/7/2017
This would be a fantastic read. Absolutely hilarious.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/7/2017
That is one of the few fen-Naruto characters that rally makes sense. Here it makes sense and I agree. The way this character is written requires a female version. Usually people do it for dumb reasons but this is excellent and a lot of fun.
icecatfire chapter 5 . 9/6/2017
... She's pregnant, isn't she? That's one of the only things that I could come up with for HER to flee when she didn't want to.

That added with the fact that she is a WOMAN/GIRL and you mentioned that she had SEX with Sasuke a LOT...

Not to mention that the village still didn't like Naruto at this time, they wouldn't react well to "the demon brat" PREGNANT with SASUKE'S child. They would probably think she RAPED/USED/HYPNOTIZED/TRICKED him in some way.

Her only option? Run away for the possible baby's safety. *Shrugs* But I could be wrong. ;
rainbowfiredrake chapter 7 . 9/6/2017
I want this turned into a full length story so bad. I love it and I was laughing at many parts of it. I loved the part where she says "My imaginary friend is bigger then yours". Please make a full length story.
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