So, Vader gets sent back to do better and to do that he agrees to do even worse?

No choice? Rubbish.

And what's the point of a do-over if he's just going to put himself under Palpatine's thumb again, except worse?

In this it does make sense because the force would be responsible for anakin's live there for he would need punishment because he let palpatine control anakin's dreams

All these turds bitching about Starkiller shut up he was fantastic you people just love sucking the fun out of everything

This characterization is really forced. If Vos did something like this with such ease, he already had a precident for it, and if he had such remarks towarsmds his padawan, there was nost certainly no way the boy respected him. Vos is a caricature.

Jesus Christ your a shit writer, seriously why do you feel the need to involve star killer this whole story would be far more interesting without him and his entire NON-CANON story.

Dude star killer isn’t canon can you people please stop involving star killer in everything he’s a boring character from a decent video game.

Vader could walk for days and never feel tired.

Jedi never once said the living force was a paradise

What a weird route to take for a do-over story. Let's go back to fix mistakes, only to make new ones of equal or worse severity... I guess I'll just go rewatch canon then?

Vos doesn't get a happy ending in the new canon

Vader could claim to be the result of Darth Cognus' second string

That was dope!

Good lord! What the hell, vos?! I do wonder if you are using legends version of quinlain vos. I don't think he was that much of a douchebag in the clone wars show...

Hmmm... can't really give a judgement here. I'm still intrigued though.

An incredibly attractive story idea though the writing felt like it was struggling there. Nevertheless I am really excited to see how this will turn out!