Reviews for Fighting Without a Cause (discontinued)
stevem1 chapter 35 . 5/22
There was some good ideas in this story. There are some problems.

First problem is the story is labeled complete when in reality it was abandoned.

There are some minor spelling and word choice issues.

The Harry brought into the story is somewhat schizophrenic. He’s supposed to be a hardened soldier but acts more like a cop.

On the positive side there is a lot of unusual and creative ideas. The author is to be commended.

Some of story is excellent.

If you have a few free hours I’d recommend giving it a try, keeping in mind there is no conclusion of the plot.
stevem1 chapter 16 . 5/22
This is stupid. Kill your sister do you understand power? A person who’d kill his sister is not to be trusted. Period.
Guest chapter 35 . 4/16
Good story ! Disappointed that it’s discontinued though
ITC chapter 35 . 4/15
Do or do not, there is no try. Bad form, shame on you.
void242 chapter 35 . 3/10
A well written story even it has its problem.
highlander348 chapter 1 . 2/13
Is this story dead for good? :(
AlphaFlash chapter 3 . 9/27/2019
can I take the story if youre not continuing it?
TsukuyoGintoki chapter 35 . 6/12/2019
Thank you for leaving the story up. I did enjoy the chapters that you did write. :)
Nano D Suu chapter 17 . 2/14/2019
Well. That overpowered memory stealing is complete bullshit. With how you portrate Blase here, she should't be able to just enter Harry mind for months. Paranoid Occlument Harry. I doubt even full succub would be able do that. And here just half-breed. And so skilled as it seems.
That shitty family drama in the same chapter just killed story for me. Ron fucking Wesley. Go to hell with that shit. Even if Harry prevent that, you still right bastard for even suggesting. There special place in here for all shitty autors, who paired Ron with good girls. Those, who paired him with Luna i would kill with my own hand for exaple.
Nano D Suu chapter 16 . 2/14/2019
He can't kill Rose because of Unbreakable Vow he gave, so why build that cheap suspence?
Nano D Suu chapter 2 . 2/14/2019
Wow. That was so stupid. Telling them all that he defeated Voldi with Hallows. Now all snakebastard need is caprure on of many people who heard that and torture info from them. He should tell that only to Dumbles.
sunandkp chapter 35 . 1/13/2019
One of the good ones which i have read though now i know it is orphaned!
Guest chapter 35 . 1/5/2019
good story
Padhi chapter 35 . 12/5/2018
U R one asshole writter plz never write again
Padhi chapter 27 . 12/5/2018
U R such a pathetic writter why the hell u explain top much to a situation instead of continuing the story it is really frustrating to read and why harry is not killing the other harry like seriously the war is going and he is talking for someone who u received harry this chapter doesn't do justice to him pathetic writing
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