Reviews for Hinata and the Cursed Mark
Cookies chapter 3 . 7/12/2018
Continue!,

Please?
NarHina chapter 3 . 4/23/2016
Looks good please continue I want to see more but I hope you still make Hinata have feelings for Naruto even if she die leave other story were Hinata leaves with the curse mark have her whoring herself to every other guy.

Which I would't mind so much if it said that it would defiantly end with Naruto and Hinata and got finished.

Any way I like it you went in how Hinata feels and made her darker the only things I can think on for improving are adding the bit where Hinata gives Naruto the medicine since it was one of the only NaruHina moments in the series.

Show Hinata thinking about everything Neji did to her before they fight and the same about her father and sister.

Show Anko's and her relationship.

Also make Naruto turn Neji good before they go after Hinata and be anger at her clan for everything they did to her.

Also have Naruto fight Hinata in the finals and have them bound but also have Naruto reluctant to hurt her at first.

In part 2 try and get the Hyuga clan in with Naruto trying to remove the cage bird seal and becoming friends with Hiashi, Neji and a big brother to Hanabi after they repent for what they done to Hinata and promise to make it right.

Also make Hanabi hurt the most beside Naruto when Hinata left since she does love her sister.

Hinata should still love Naruto but be jealous that he is closer to her family then she was and want revenge against the Hyuga.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
cool girl chapter 3 . 11/13/2014
please put more details it makes it more interesting
Guest chapter 3 . 9/27/2014
This story is so interesting! I'm wondering what would happen to hinata durring the shippuden era. Man, this fanfic got potential! I'm hoping this person would continue with this story. Will hinata go rogue? What will happen to naruto when pain attacks? Guess we'll just wait and see.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
Plz, this is 2014. We're still waiting! Yea, i'm still reading this over and over...
Brittany6391 chapter 3 . 3/16/2014
Please update I been looking for a recent curse mark hinata story
MYK-ON chapter 3 . 3/10/2014
Jezz your teasing me because the way this chapter was made makes me want to read more.
guest chapter 3 . 2/18/2014
Plz hurry up I've been waiting for the latest update.
guest of honor chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
plzzz udate
angelmoon78 chapter 3 . 12/18/2013
I love this. Are you going to continue, or is this on some sort of hiatus? I'd love to see this completed one day :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Great story. Interesting plot. Don't abandon this fic!
Californian Calico Cat chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
I love the story so far and the way it's written, but it's a bit too short. I would try to use words like "incredulous" "blatant" or so to prolong it. Keep Writing!
ThatGuyOverThere7 chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
Keep going, its great, but too short
kaito kenshin chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
hmmm...

actually liked it.

waiting for more"!
KuroKanashimi chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
ummm the way he ignored her was sort of forced... and when during anything did naruto beg sakura for ramen.. i mean sure he'd ask.. but begging and ignoring others just to beg for sakura to go out for ramen with him... i'm sure I've seen that part in a naruto bash fic before...

"Hinata raised an eyebrow, and sat down on her bed. Anko spoke first, "You'll be doing ninjutsu and summoning jutsu with me." Kurenai spoke next, "I'll teach you genjutsu and do some chakra control with you." Hiashi spoke last, "We'll be doing taijutsu, the Jyuuken and normal hand to hand combat. I'll do kenjutsu with you as well." With that Kurenai hopped out the window, no doubt to meet with Asuma, Anko poofed out of the room. And Hiashi used the door." ummm not to be rude but umm that's like ummm makes her overpowering then any one in her generation right there..
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