Hello there. Jeez, I haven't kept up with the story for a very long time.
A few days ago I started rereading all the chapters and damn I really love this story. I truly think it's one of the best dbz fanfics on this platform. I'm only missing the lemons lol
I'm so excited for the next chapters. I just hope you'll give me a much needed goku and bra happy ending.

Don't do this Gater, don't give me hope.

Pussy

Can you atleast give a summary of how your buu saga events wouldve went

Oh no.

My habit of not reading chapter names has led me to some surprises before but none this bad.

I understand why you did this, hope you've got some new material down the pipe.

Well, fuck. I really like this story, but is what you decide and I respect that. Thank you for write.

love your idea, looking forward to the next chapter

Just what is happening to Bra and why is she dying? I’m so sorry, I lost track of the events in this story because I was so busy with my daily work. But why is Bra dying? And when I read Insatiable Desires, I can see that Goku can feel that she is indeed dying. It really is gonna break his heart but please do me a small favor and enlighten me. What is happening to Bra and why is she dying?

Thanks. Looking forward for another chapter update and I’ll read whenever I can.

Seems legit.

Omg!

I could snort up your fight scenes like coke. It's a shame you're done after this. I hope Bra doesn't have to sacrifice herself anytime soon, she has a lot to live for.

Well, I do like this story but why kill Bra that way? I know you have reasons but for Bra as powerful she was during the story, to merely die naturally... It was good yet not enough for the readers; if you saw the reviews you currently have.

Now I don’t disrespect fellow Authors but merely give them advice at times, and this is one of those times.

You could have added a random new enemy that could have killed her off yet he/she was also killed as well by either her son, or even Vegeta after witnessing this. Plus I was thinking maybe adding other OC’s and maybe AU it up with some other Franchises like High School DxD, Digimon, Kingdom Hearts, and a few others as an example, and maybe include other Gods of Destruction; like the rumored other ones like Nean? She was meant to be with Goku as well, and I figured maybe she would be Bi-Sexual or into both Genders, and wouldn’t mind sharing since she, Goku, and Bra, are linked as a trio. If not her, I was thinking maybe you PM me and see what I can do for ya, as this is a great story, but it’s getting predictable at best with Bra, Goku, and Vegeta mostly.

Besides that I hope those that read this review would be considerate as like you probably, we all have lives as well and at the times, we have to “Shorten” it to leave suspense for the next chapter as to who it is.

I am looking forward for more as such, and if you need advice, just PM me, and I’ll see what I can do.

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! NO!

It became bad, badder and baddest as it went on.

That title made me do a double take, not gonna lie. It's fine to do short chapters, so long as you don't go off the map.