Hey bro, already do a long time, right?
I just want to say here, in the reviews, that I recently was rereading this story yet again.
And, once more, I really have to say to you that this story still continues to be a very good story, even after all this time.
The plot of this story still continues to be very well executed and planned, even after all this time.
I really hope that you will be able to update your stories/fanfics again soon.

(IMPORTANT OBS!)-ALSO, again, I'm really very sorry for be asking about this to you here(in the reviews), but really PLEASE, answer the new PM/message that I recently sent to you as soon as possible, as soon as you are able.
Really please, answer the new message/PM that I sent to you as soon as you are able, as soon as possible.

Not 5 stars anymore story sucks you loser

Godlike naruto that can‘t kill anyone without tremendous effort...

Killing some, while letting others live... cause deus ex author says so without reason...

Started mediocre, then declined.

Not gonna review jk 5 stars gg

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It started off strong, and was going great despite the horrible punctuation throughout the whole story. I decided to drop the story about halfway through when 5-10 new OC’s were added every single chapter.

I picked up on the RWBY references but did you also reference Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance when Raiden and Jetstream Sam were fighting on the train? (You deny yourself and your blades true nature; You deny your weapon its purpose)

i want to see him fighting UCHIHA MADARA before he become 10 tails Jinchuriki

Why shino must died... if u want him look powerfull, at least you must make him killed named shinobi (Danzo level),, and Shino and his Team mate only chunin.. sigh i hope he kill sakura, his love for him was fake and like forced

Wow...this was amazing you have a gift when it comes too drawing your audience into the story keep up the good work

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

First time reading this:"Hard to put down"
Second time:"Cant put it down"
"Third" time:"What time is this again?"

I understand Kakashi’s depression but I expected Gai, being the insightful fool he is, would talk with Kakashi and get him to grow, become stronger so that it would never happens again. Before he was too relaxed, assumed things would work themselves out, Gai could push him to instead be more proactive.

Also why would Madara need to transplant his eyes? In this story Nagato actually has his own Rinnegan meaning that he is an Uzumaki with Uchiha blood in him. And Naruto has his own Sharingan and will eventually get his own Rinnegan as well.

-Genesis09

I’m actually surprised Tsunade didn’t reveal Naruto’s heritage upon Naruto’s death just to put the civilians in their place. And I’m surprised Naruto would go along with the Moon’s Eye Plan. I’d expect him to give a more hesitant answer like, “I’ll try your way, but if I find a path I think is better you better believe I’ll take it, dattebayo!”

Anyway I’m off to the next chapter.
-Genesis09

And idk why you all hating this story but its awesome for me