Thank you! Someone says it. I mean, really. Even in stories which generally show two people with a large age gap, like ten years, it doesn't explain why one of them has to be underage. They don't. Stop it, it's disturbing running into a smutfic starring a twelve year old.

I was a bit off put from the preview text, but when I finally worked up the courage to click on this story, it’s seems it was already removed! From what it looks like it was a story depicting CP? Or an abusive relationship and that you’ve since come to realize a bigger part of that being wrong. That’s a really good thing. It sounds like you’re moving on to a better place as a (young?) adult, and I am very happy to see the change. Good luck to you in your future endevours and growth.

I know this is very old and it's an AN, not a fic - but you're absolutely right so I'm favoriting it anyway.

I coudn't finish reading. Didn't know it was M rated...

Wow, this was super lovely! The flow of your writing really drew me in. Really love the way you handled Minato's POV and his thoughts on Kakashi especially. Kushina's message was also a really nice extra touch;;

Awwwwwwww... so sad yet. Awesome story. I LOVE IT!

I absolutely love how Kushina handled that. Poor Kakashi.

It's 1 am in the morning and I'm about to cry. I really love this fic.

I'm not that much into yaoi (sometimes curiosity just gets the better of me) but, damn, this was brilliant!

Oh man! This was so sad. So very, very sad. But then again, I really liked the lemon and the MinaKaka pairing.

( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 )

( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a )

This was really beautiful and sad. Loved it!

Gosh this is so unbelievably sad yet I can genuinely see this happening. I loved the relationship between Kakashi and Minato and how far Minato would go for his student, it makes me want to cry for both of them. I can't imagine how Kakashi must feel after losing so many precious people, and also more the fact he could never truely be with the one person he wanted to be with. The end almost broke my heart when Kakashi was going to kill himself, I'm so glad the third turned up just in time. I have great respect for Minato in this story which you usually don't find in other minakaka stories. This is a rare gem and I'm utterly surprised this hasn't had more reviews and favourites. I'm so glad I found this fic.
Keep up the good work! :)

And somehow I can't fathom the reality that this fanfiction only has one review. One. Fucking. Review. This fanfiction was simply amazing. I love the bond between Kakashi and Minato, even if it seems unrequited on Kakashi's part. Watching that lastest episode today sank me in the deepest pit of depression and it made me hate Kushina more than usual and made me want that Minatoxhis students relationship even more. At first I was so depressed about the way Minato treated Rin's death as if it was nothing and the way Kakashi reacted to it. Perhaps this story has given me my daily dosage of satisfactory depression that I need to start a plot for a Mina/rin, Mina/obi or Mina/kaka, I thank you so much for giving me this inspiration. Continue to do great things.

Alyssa-kaye

Makes one wonder who was the first to arrive on both occasions, doesn't it? You make a good case for Minato and Kakashi, respectively.