Is there any chance your muse might come back to this? It's not really an ending, there needs to be more fleshing out and the fallout needs to be examined in my opinion

Red

Great story!

Dam that’s a harsh story in parts but like it

This is actually a really interesting premise and I quite enjoyed reading this story. Continued good luck and energy with your writing

This is delightful. I eagerly await more. .

""I will be remaining as Potions Master, and have taken up the duties of Administrative Assistant in lue of the being Head of House." The word you want is LIEU. "... in LIEU of being Head of House."

I'm surprised we haven't heard "When my father hears ..." Or is Draco now not old enough to talk? I'm also VERY surprised that Snape allowed a spanking, especially "on the bare." Spankings were not common when I was in grammar school (the 60s), but there were a handful of kids who received them a few times a year. At the school where I taught in the early 90s, a parent would occasionally show up at school and pull a son or daughter from class and administer a spanking, generally in the office.

This is an interesting situation.

don't you just love those unbreakable contracts which you don't know you've signed up to? very clever

I like it

cool

Little confused at to why Fudge lost his magic?

If this is the end of this story. I truly enjoyed it. I take it Fudge lost power because he allowed Theo to be freed. As for those who died. They got what the deserved.

awesome loved the ending with tom and his merry band of morons getting their just deserts!
Brad

Of all the "By his hand" stories I have read, this has just got to be the simplest yet most accetable method ever. Love your work, (hate the waiting for updates).

Okay, why did Fudge loose his magic? I love this chapter and I really would love to read more, as I would love to know how Harry gets the Slytherin house in order and why Fudge lost his magic.

That was an original solution!