I’ve reread this fanfic so many times. It’s one of my favorite Whiterose fics because you don’t immediately soften up Weiss. She’s prickly and bitchy and I adore her for it. They’re affection for each other grows more naturally and the core of ruby and Weiss’s character don’t feel compromised because of the budding romance. That’s hard to do in writing and I commend u for it.

10/10 very nice

Starting to read the Vale series fill the void of Choice. Blew through this one pretty quick again but I loved it. Your characterization is so genuine and relatable, especially the way you write Ruby I relate to on too many levels, it gives the story a very genuine feel and the characters never seem to be acting crazy just for stuff to happen the reactions seem very real and genuine like what real people would do as well as sticking quite well to their characters in show as always a hug sucker for WhiteRose and I hope maybe Yang and Blake can work it out or at least talk about their relationship in one of the sequels. Gonna be moving on to part two either tonight or tomorrow. Love your work as always.

-Ironwind

Finished this a while back, but anyway, it was a nice read, seeing how Ruby was dealing with her feelings for Weiss, vice-versa, and all that. This was your first story? If so, not bad for your first. Hopefully, I can check out the others of the Vale series when I get the time to do so.

very good so far, just watch spelling and word choice. I know she is sad, but I doubt Ruby will MOP over Weiss:)

on a cute and awkward scale, it's over 9000!

That... was one helluva good story there. i'm looking forward for reading melding vale.

Great chapter, I was laughing the whole time, I'm in a great mood thanks to you!

good start

Bessst whiterose evaaah. I really like how paced this. Cant wait for the next

Wish I could forget this story just so I could reread it with a clear slate.

I really liked this chapter! It was very well written and one my favorite chaps of this fic. I loved how you explain Weiss feelings and views in this chapter. Weiss is my favorite character mainly because I relate a lot to her and when reading this chapter I felt myself emulating with everything. So just thank you for writing such a brilliant story! :)

Well it seems I spoke to soon. I thought they had the same family situation as the show. It makes a lot more sense now. Sorry about that. This is why I wish we could edit or delete reviews.

Overall I really enjoyed this chapter. The only real comment I have is I have a VERY hard time buying Ruby not being as welcome at home as Yang is. I feel like their dad would love them both equally.

Amazing story, thank you for brightening up my day with this pleasant read, I thoroughly enjoyed it!