Good story.

Good start.

Ok so let me get this straight. Weiss helped ruby train so she could always defend herself yet always protected her so she could never do so? That doesn't make sense. Shouldn't she see that being protective and babying her will only make her weak?

Oh man, this brings back memories. You know, I've probably read around a thousand of these RWBY stories, but I'm always going to remember this one. This was one of the first stories I remember that didn't go for "Weiss is incompetent, Ruby is the best ever." Which is still unfortunately common, despite the fact that Weiss is apparently at the top of her sparring class. A class which also has Ruby and Pyrrha, mind you.

Also, this chapter was super hot. Props.

Ummm you might want to up the rating to M. That scene was definitely M material

that was an awsome fic i couldn't stop laughing at jaune finally grew a pair LOL

I see the story has went on hiatus, but you know, I'd leave it right the way it is. That ending for chp6 is a high enough note to hang your hat on.

I did not know this story existed until today and am glad that I am no longer missing out on this great writing. The characters are captured very well and are in character.
It is also nice to see someone who has proper English unlike most of the people on this site.(Americans)
Zed for the win!

Geez, I kept squealing and jumping on my bed at every sentence. This is truly amazing. I love how cute Weiss is, but still not too out of character, she's just a... an older Weiss, I guess? She's adorable.
It seems you decided to write a more complicated and troubled Ruby, who somehow needs Weiss's comfort. I'm not sure if you will continue on this idea or if this was just part of the "setup", but I like this idea a lot. Maybe because it's usually the opposite in most fanfictions, and it feels good to read something different.
I also love your writing. It may sound weird, but I love when the characters' "daily routine" is described, such as using shampoo or making beds (I've read Weiss and Ruby brushing their teeth in another fanfiction), it feels as they are more... real, more human (or more Faunus, no discrimination). Okay, this is totally weird.
Either way, I loved reading your fanfiction. My heart skipped a bit when Ruby said "I love you". It was unexpected, truly, but at the same time it really fitted inside the story, maybe because you perfectly described Weiss's reaction and her struggle the next day. Basically, I love how you write their emotions, once again, it feels so real, so true, I just feel like drowning into the story.
Anyway, I guess I have nothing much to say. Which is a good thing. I always have a really critical view while reading, I end up analysing every sentence, judging the plot and the space, comparing the characters inside and outside the story... so most of time, I really have a lot of critics to make (not in a disrespectful way of course, I merely try to give advicd to help improving), but this time, I've got to admit there is nothing I can say. Chapter 2 was a bit predictable (which is not even a bas thing, mind you), but that's it. Your fanfiction truly is perfect according to my own standards.

So... thank you a lot for taking the time to write it, it was truly enjoyable. And I hope you find both time and inspiration to write another chapter.
Thanks.

I'm glad they sorted out their things. Never did I think it would be Weiss to bawl first, but I did like that a lot. It makes her all the more human. :)

Misunderstandings and commitment issues, what a roller coaster ride that was XD.
Glad that things worked out in the end.
The title of this chapter made me think of a line from Frozen.

This story is so sweet! Maybe I am softer than I think but I shed tears in this * sniff * happy and sad tears. Such a sweet story I love it!

Oh that's so sweet and yay! their together now.

Crisis averted! Cool :) Was worry that it would carry on and fester a bit longer.

Ok, with this one, I'll be jumping right into the review and criticism.

For some characters, at times I feel they can come off slightly OOC. Not anything to work youself up about too much, I just found at times, some characters say things in a certain way or something, and I just don't see them saying it that way. Just my opinion. It's quite possible that we have simply interpreted the characters in two different ways. If you disagree with me, then by all means do what you feel is right. I'm just some guy on the internet, afterall.
Something else that irked me was that at some points in this most recent chapter, it appears as though Weiss' thoughts are written in plain text. This, contrary to previous thoughts being written in italic. If I'm wrong about it being a mistake, I would enjoy it if you would clarify what those sentences mean.

I'm not very good at giving praise yet. I always feel as though I come off as awkward while giving positive feedback, but I'll try my best.
Your spelling appears great, no faults there. That might, though, be do to Gear's editing. Sentence structure is equally great. It'll be interesting to see what this story looks like without his editing (and I assume replaced with your own?). Overall, the story flows pretty well. A smooth read.
Moving on to more subjective topics, Let's talk about the darkness (by which I mean, the death of Ruby's mom). Although some might dislike it, I find it crucial in this story. It plays its role. I wouldn't have it or it's references any other way. I would like to take a minute to talk about Ren. What is he up to? Running around late at night like that. Such a mysterious comment he made. He made it sound as though he didn't sleep at all. I assume that will be elaborated on in future chapters. The romance between Ruby and Weiss is very well written, if a little bit rushed. As I was reading the paragraphs preceeding the reveal, I saw it was coming up. I was scared that it would be, again, rushed and unsatisfactory. I'm very glad I was wrong. Although it happened it a relatively short word-span, it managed to convey all the emotions and fluff I like to see. Good job. I look forward to seeing what happens the next morning.

Don't worry about slow updates. Take whatever time you need. Don't pressure yourself, and don't let others pressure you either.
P.S. I didn't know there was another way to write pyjamas.

Anyway, good work on the story so far. Good luck on the next chapters. I can barely contain myself.

TCR