Thank you so much for not only writing an amazing piece, but for finishing it. I was so happy that you weren't like those who has an interesting storyline but gets abandoned in the end.

Thank you for filling up the void I feel from NaruHina canon. You gave us everything, quite literally! I love how Naruto is so addicted to Hinata!

Pretty good story, but it sort of fell flat at the end. It just seems like Jiyuu's whole motive was just a mix of "woe is me, listen to my sob story" and "eh, idk lol" (reminiscent of Sword Art Online's first arc). The story as a whole had some pretty good pacing and dialogue, and it is still better than most of the stuff that gets posted. Good job!

AMAZING STORY! Love love love your writing you create lovely storytelling and ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! The naruhina FLUFFYNESS! I. JUST. CANT. EVEN! I also read your one sgot collection and O.M.G! Anything you write is BEAUTIFUL! NEVER STOP WRITING PLZ! i will read anything you write ALWAYS! I just LOVE your naruto and hinata interaction so much! Its soooooo unique and authentic i feel! Thier love us so TANGIBLE in your words i love it soooooooo much! Sorry, fan girling HARD but i cant help it when i find someone who writes naruhina so beautifully! Soooooo much love and respect! Thank you for this gorgeous story!

I swear to god I know you probably don’t read those reviews anymore since it’s 2020, but OMG I love your story! From beginning to now (I’m still at chapter 16) everything is literally amazing they’re is suspens, romance, humour literally everything! I never leave reviews but I just couldn’t not say something! I wish you had more naruhinas! I saw you only had 2/3! I would read them all tbh!

Ok. Without a doubt. This was one of the most intense and best Naruto stories in here. I felt like I was indulged in a serious law and order SVU episode mixed with criminal minds in a Naruto world setting which was just gold I loved how in character it was I love the references if the last bit it confused me cause I thought they got together in another way earlier in the chapters but I adjusted lol and it was just perfection reading word for word too the end. Like be dang lol boruto was about to be sniffed before even getting born dang lol the way it was so constructed and even looked fun at the anime classic story of why I did this was handled so vindictive like it was perfectly dark as the ninja world should be anyways so this was a jewel a dark twisted jewel to read and very funny on a lot of parts

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it's ok!you did an amazing job!

I really enjoyed this fanfic up until the ending, it was kinda eh for me, I really was expecting some action of Naruto to do something to the villains in the last chapter, and a big twist at the end.

Good story! Good plot. I hope you write another naruhina story! Thank you!

oh my god, im so speechless, no words can explain how much i love this story and ur writing skills as well, might i say, ur brilliant, thanks for sharing us ur talent!

this chapter is soo cute!

If they weren't undercover, Nine-Tails Chakra Mode would come in real handy for sensing people's intentions and hidden demeanors.

I'm rereading this for the first time in a while! Love your writing so much and I'm excited to get absorbed in this story again!

I'm not especially far, but it sounds like you're not getting a lot of positive feedback, so let me say this; you're story is incredibly well done. It's far grittier than Naruto, and maybe people don't like that, but it feels VERY real for the most part. The writing is well done with few mistakes, already puting this a cut above most stories.
While the story is a little too gritty for me as I hate anything to do with an unhappy Hinata, this is amlb amazing story, that balances the tense stomach dropping moments of worry along with the sweet smiles of NaruHina fluff, and I think this has been an asonishingly good rollercoaster of a story