Reviews for Inheritance
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 1 . 6/9
Maravilloso!
Un Fantástico Comienzo!
Me Encanto
pavook chapter 2 . 6/7
I'm enjoying this fanfic, but not all of it.

Lily's resurrection is fine. There is a connection to her ritual and Voldemort's, so the explanation is decent. Even though some details are missing, it's understandable. There is just one thing, if Lily got Harry's memories, did Voldemort got some too? They both kind of morphed back to life from Harry's blood so I'm curious.
Represses sexual charge was an interesting touch and again relatively well explained. I don't even care if he gets together with his mum. With how he is acting I would be surprised if he did not go for everyone he has any slight feelings for. With the life he held up this point, he would latch onto anyone who was half decent and actually helped him instead of just offering talk and do nothing. \cough, something sounding like dumb and door\. How anyone could think that someone would be safe beyond blood wards when that exactly was used in the resurrection of Tom?

Harry could have faked out his intelligence and behavior, but faking out knowledge is one thing, but not using it in a critical moment is another. In this instance, the explanation doesn't hold well. On the other hand, in critical moments he was always alone and his testimony was never tested or verified, so who knows. When Harry and Lily moved into a duel without wands, it went beyond reasonable of what they should be capable of. This leap was too much of a stretch, it should not be possible to do so easily.
gginsc chapter 1 . 5/5
Just verified that this story contains incest between a mother and her son. How sick can you get? I will not be reading this trash.
EmperorGhoul chapter 1 . 5/4
if anyone is looking for smut it is on Archive of your own. Megamatt09 Inheritance
Harbinger chapter 2 . 2/23
How do I see the smut your description is confusing help me?
DontMindMe chapter 16 . 2/5
How come no one ended up pregnant? It seems like something they would all want
SaxoBoneGod chapter 2 . 1/26
After looking for it, I finally found the lemons. I'm just gonna hop over there and read it since FanFiction is big dumb on their "mature" classification.
Tiwa Vol chapter 7 . 8/17/2019
cock bkocked by terms of service. hhaha legend.
JustAnAverageGuy101 chapter 1 . 7/31/2019
Gusta
Maistzen chapter 16 . 6/26/2019
Interesante
lameduck987 chapter 2 . 3/8/2019
Where do i find it exactly? Cause i tried your blog wasnt there
MR chapter 2 . 1/4/2019
WHere is the lemon?
Tenjo chapter 10 . 12/25/2018
Very subjective review about bodies and clothes. The review itself will be talking as though it’s objective but I’m well aware that it is subjective.

Most of these stories that involve sex make the women have large breasts (from a small D-cup to a small H-cup) and I honestly don’t get why. For the rest of the body to be proportionate to those large breasts the woman would have to be quite thick all around and that’s not all that appealing. Not to mention large breasts naturally entail broader shoulders and a broader back. The size isn’t the only issue either, they all use the most boring idea of ‘sexy’ when they dress them. Red lipstick isn’t sexy. High heels aren’t sexy (or at least they’re only sexy when wearing a dress). Jean skirts aren’t sexy.

I’m yet to see a story actually detail a woman with an attractive body and fashion sense.
TheReaderofGods chapter 2 . 12/20/2018
Where do we go for lemons
kirosyamcha chapter 4 . 11/18/2018
its funny to read but i wish it was more realistic :(
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