IT'S CHRISTMAS!
And as promised I said I would post the first chapter of the rewrite by the end of the year. It is on my page i would like plenty of reviews for feedback. The reason i decided to do a rewrite is because when I started it I had no plot to build up to and it had too many loose ends. But now I have a plot in mind and I am trying to make sure there aren't any loose end. If there are can someone please tell me so i can sort it out as soon as possible.

Thanks guys

Optimus is Bae 17 ;)