"Hey I deleted the old story because willia pointed it out to me that my story is a bit bland. I agree so here is my rewrite.
Chapter 1
Daemon's P.O.V
I sat on my bed with my head in my hands. I try to forget but it never works. The memories rushed through my head. The jeering, the smirks, the endless torturous shunning. They abandoned me, disowned me and bullied me. My name was Percy Jackson, son of Poseidon and saviour to Olympus. But then it all changed when he arrived, when he turned my life to hell...
*Flashback*
I sat in my cabin reading (or at least trying to) a book on Roman mythology. Chiron had insisted that we learnt it after we combined with the Roman camp making a new camp called Camp Demi-god. Finally I grew so frustrated that I flung the book onto the floor. No matter whether the book was in English or Greek, the outcome was the same. I could never read it, no matter what I tried. I was about to pick it up and try again, when a scream for help echoed around. I quickly got out my pen/sword Riptide and raced out of the cabin. Then I saw him. A boy was running towards the borders, a dagger in hand, with... was that 6 Hellhounds chasing him?!
I quickly rushed towards him and turned riptide into sword form. For me the next few moments were a flurry of ducking, dodging, slicing and stabbing whilst he just stood there dumbfounded. Finally, when there was only one left, all the campers came out to see me standing there catching a quick breath and the boy race forwards to kill the Hellhound. Uh oh, he's gonna get hurt, I thought. As he ran forth, so did the monster. He was about to be killed when he suddenly tripped and luckily the dagger impaled itself into the Hellhound, turning it to dust. I heard gasps of shock from behind me and turned around. Of course the whole camp just had to be here to watch that. Great. I was brought out of my thoughts when someone shoved me from behind. I turned and saw the boy standing there. Now I had gotten a better look at him I saw he was about 6 ft 1 with olive skin, sandy blonde hair, mud brown eyes and decently sized muscles. I expected him to thank me but I got something less expected.
"Why didn't you help me?," He asked, "You left me to defeat 6 of those things on my own with only a dagger whilst you just stood there!"
"Wha- Bu- I defeated 5 of them! You only defeated one of them and the only reason for that was because you tripped and accidently stabbed the Hellhound!" I yelled in fury. How dare he claim that.
"Liar! Look around you; all these people saw it as well."
I saw Chiron step forward. "Percy is this true? did you really do that?"
A camper from the Apollo cabin decided to speak up. " Yes Chiron. We just saw Percy standing there as that guy defeated the Hellhound!"
Chiron looked back at me with that I-am-very-disappointed-in-you look making me look away before turning his attention back to the lying bastard. "What is your name my child?"
"Owen Rowley."
" Do you happen to know who your Godly parent is?"
At this Owen just looked confused.
"I believe I can help you with this."
Dad! I quickly looked up and smiled at my father which he responded to with, yet again, the disappointed look. I looked away again, unable to look at him.
I heard gasps behind me and a green light enveloped me. When I looked up this time I saw the mark of my father glowing in the sky above Owens head. My mouth hung open. He couldn't mean that this bastard was my brother!
"This is my son and he is destined to be a great hero. Welcome him to camp and treat him with the respect that the prince of the Sea and my favourite son deserves."
This made me explode. "I thought I was your favourite son!"
He looked at me, disgust filling his facial features." You? You are a disgrace! You didn't help your brother, you just stood there! You are no son of mine. I disown you and take away your powers. You better find another cabin to stay in boy, for you can no longer stay in mine."
I felt Riptide leave my pocket and watched it soar into Owen's open hand. Poseidon gave one last adoring look to Owen before disappearing in a green flash. Silence filled the air until the campers erupted into cheers. Every one of them. They hoisted Dennis onto their shoulders and carried him down the hill. I was left alone there, standing on the hill with salty tears in my eyes. They had left me. I trudged down the hill in defeat, sadness and anger to retrieve my things. I would wait until Tyson, Thalia and Nico visited before I made my decision. I can only hope Annabeth will stay by my side.
Over the next few days I went through hell. I slept in the Hermes cabin but all my things were stolen. When I went to training I was left in the corner without a partner watching the others. My friends left me for him but at least I had Annabeth. He went on his first quest a week after arriving and killed a harpy. He took Annabeth and Grover with him and whilst they were gone I visited Hephaestus. He crafted a beautiful silver ring with a green emerald on top. I was going to propose to Annabeth.
When they returned Annabeth told me to meet her by the beach. This might be my only chance to ask her I realized, so I raced down there. When I got there I saw a sight that boiled my blood and made me want to die. My wise girl was snogging him. She was snogging that bastard. They hadn't seen me yet. I surged forward, grabbed his top and yanked him off of her. I drew my new blade out of it's sheath and pointed it at his neck. "You will pay you bastard." I told him lifting my sword, unaware of the gathering crowd.
"Percy stop!"
I turned and saw Annabeth. I lifted my blade higher before reasserting it into the sheath. I walked over to her and slapped her straight across the face causing her cheeks to go bright red. of course the Gods had to appear at that very moment.
"What do you think you are doing to my daughter!" I heard Athena shout.
I whipped around and replied, "She left me without the decency to even tell me. She left me for him. I was going to propose to her today, but I guess he is more important to her then me and my love. To hell with you all. You left me for that backstabbing bastard. Me. You better be proud of what you did Athena. You birthed a monster."
The Gods looked on at me with fury until Finally I couldn't take it any more. " All of you have caused this. You betrayed me. Whenever you need me I won't be there. Don't forget, you have him now." I said bitterly before stalking into the forest. I never got to talk to my brother, or Thalia or Nico. I just left them staring at me.
I ran for days fighting monsters as I went until they found me...
Kronos, Krios and Hyperion were all standing there with their weapons.
"What do you want, "I asked sourly.
Suddenly Kronos started to roll about on the floor in laughter causing his brothers to stare at him with confusion.
"What is so funny brother?" They asked.
Kronos stopped laughing and stood up smiling evilly. "We came here to kill him, but there's no need. We needn't worry. Can't you see it in his eyes? They've broken him completely. Lets just kill him quickly and get home. He won't be much of a challenge. They surged forward only to find that I had gone.
I found myself in a black room with a man sitting in his throne. As soon as he saw me he leapt off of it and walked towards me. "Greetings Perseus-"
"Percy," I interrupted him.
"I am Chaos, no bowing please, and I would like to place an offer for you."
" What kind of offer would that be my Lord?" I asked more interested.
"The offer to become a commander of my army and to be my son with 1/3 of my powers. Many of my current soldiers you used to know.Do you accept?"
"I would be honoured lor- Father?"
He just smiled and led me out of the chamber
*Flashback end*
I lifted my head and looked into my mirror to see myself. My hair was as black as the night sky, my muscles were more defined, I had blood red eyes and a paler complexion. It has been five centuries since I left camp, 497 years since I became immortal. Yet still my soul is as unforgiving as ever. They turned me into this. I am Daemon son of Chaos, Commander of the SW army, assassin of Chaos, blessed by Chronos, Pontus and Nyx. I am Daemon the leader of the Omegas, Daemon the Unforgiving, Daemon the assassin of Chaos. I am no longer Percy Jackson but I will keep that promise I made long ago. A new war is coming, one more deadly then ever, and this time they will not have their saviour of Olympus to help them.
This was a total re-write but I hope you liked it. I am still going to require character ideas so if you posted one before re post it. Hope you enjoyed it. Review! Peace out!