Finally I have everything set up for the revised version of this story. The main plot of the story has been posted on my second account so you guys go show some love and tell me what you think.

I KNOW I KNOW the plot is much different, but as the story begins you'll see just how similar it is.

Here's a sneak peek.

Oh and here is the link to the new story /s/12026574/1/Lucy-Stays-Out-Late

You can also just search for the name if you aren't following my second account. Lucy Stays Out Late.


"Mmmm, Laxus." Blue eyes peered down at me. They where almost gray from how pale they were, but all the more beautiful. They glazed over my form, slumped over the bar counter. Those eyes show great amusement I see. I groan and roll closer to him. "Mmmm, hey...I think you where in my- in my- where am I?"

A hand was placed on the small of my back and green hair grazed my cheek. I peek up through my bangs to see Freed hovering above me. "Mrs. Lucy, your time with Laxus has ran out." I groan again and roll in the opposite direction, away from Freed's hands.

"No, no i'll pay for more time...I'll-mmmm I'llpaymoretimetobewithLaxus." Freed sighs and looks over at Laxus sitting beside me, coolly sipping a glass of straight hard rum.

"I thought we agreed to not get Mrs. Lucy drunk anymore." Laxus sighs, placing his beer mug in front of my head and takes a stand. I shuffle to lean up with him, however my body didn't agree with me. It felt like a ton of bricks, weighing me down. I couldn't hold myself up. I had even forgotten what I wanted to talk to Laxus for anyway. There was a reason. I came here, because I wanted to talk to Laxus about something...but what?

Laxus slowly slides his hands under the bar and down to me legs. He hooked his arm under and placed his other on my back, lifting me off the bar stool and into his arms. I subconsciously curl up into him and clench his shirt. He was warm.

"I'll take her home." He relates to Freed. "She said she'll pay more so i'll do it. Besides, my shift is over."

I close my eyes and take in Laxus's sent surrounding all around me. I want more of it.

Why can't everything just stay this way? Why did Laxus have to become my brother? Why did I fall in love with him. Why did my mother remarry? Why can't I be with Laxus?

Why does everything have to "Why?"


Is anyone as excited about this as I am!?