A/N: if you read the A/N the last chapter of Dark thoughts, then my apologies... i didn't mean to draw any sort of attention or support or pity or whatever. i was sad to end the series. I HAD to end the series if I were to start new project. A thank you to Scraper and Hosen who unnecessarily boosted my morale by their reviews though.

that doesn't change the fact that i am a bad author. This IS true, my grammar is terrible and some of my structure is a bit odd. if i said "Oooh, i am the best author EVA!" i will not improve a slightest on the other hand, if i kept whining like i do (unintentionally ) i will stay where i am. so i need to balance between them.

Enough of me! Sir LoyalToTheLegion has Submitted an idea! i swear to god, i was about to shut this down too due to the general lack of intrest but Sir Legion proved me wrong! Thank you so much :D

Boss XII

Manifestation of Desire

I kind of expected the covetous demon to be more... Gluttonous. There is nothing in his chamber really to suggest he's been eating like skeletons and he isn't scary or intimidating. He should of been horrific like the gaping dragon, not a crawling Jabba.

Name: Manifestation of desire ( to replace the covetous demon.)

Species: Ghost/Demon

Description/Battleground:

The arena will be dark circular chamber which is fairly spacious, the only light being a large fireplace. The room is littered with blackened skeletons, burnt corpses and gore.

With the body of a starving man, his ribs are visible. He seems to be just skin and bones with his flesh black and rotting. Yellow bone is visible in patches. He wears tatters, with rusting armour plates seemingly sown into what skin he has left. Sharpened bones stick out of his forearms, which he uses to inflict heavy bleeding. He is taller than the player, roughly the size of mytha.

His face is covered by a hood and rags that act as a scarf. Only his eyes are visible, though they are white and glassy. His weapon of choice consists of his forearms and a rusty cooking spit. The weapon does dark damage with sweeping attacks or fast jabs.

His ability is that he is actually an evil spirit, so he can randomly become transparent, immune to all physical attacks and can hit through your shield. (When he does this he is only vulnerable to sorcery and miracles, whereas normally he is immune to sorcery and miracles as he "eats" them to heal. He absorbs them through his scarf.) He often switches between the forms, so it is not impossible for melee builds to kill him.

Soul description:

This demon is a manifestation of hunger and desire, his physical form is more akin to an illusion, hungering yet unable to eat, only growing hungrier. He was once part of a soul but become his own separate entity, a monstrous creation mocking the needs of the soul by blocking the path so others desire may consume them.

Attack patterns:

-Vertical slam with his spit. Long range, block able but with high damage/stamina drain.

-Lashes out with foot to break guard.

-Attempts to pummel his victim with his free hand. Builds heavy bleeding with two horizontal sweeps followed by a quick jab, then a powerful punch with a long wind up.

Moves unique to his solid form:

-Vomits a black substance, which spreads like a pool. This is followed by a violent attack of pillars rising like the firestorm spell, but does dark damage. He retreats after he casts the attack.

-Casts 3 semi homing dark beads in rapid succession.

-Casts black flame in a circle around him if you try to get behind him.

-Will cast affinity if player(s) use a healing item.

Moves in his ghost form... ( lasts a minute):

-Will rush you, swinging like the hollows crazy attack but with longer range.

-Spins three times. Stunned for a short while. Does massive damage if it connects.

-Grab attack: Impales you if you stand too close. Target range is his immediate surroundings. After he Impales you, he drives you into the ground, using his free hand to temporarily pull back his scarf. A dark beam will fire out, healing a third of his health and cursing you. He replaces his scarf and removes his spear. High vitality and armour/ dark resistance is needed to survive.

-Jumps back, jabbing with his spit.

Good one! although you forget to write what to do with his soul (weapons, miracles, etc)

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