Chapter 1
Max, Rex, and Zoe are at the battlefield, facing Goma in what appears to be forming into an all-out brawl. Max and company proved to be no match for Goma's dinosaur, Eocarcharia. It seems that all will be lost for the three, but who knows what could happen...
This is all so exciting! And I made the story!
At the battlefield...
Max and Rex try to fend off the three space pirates, while Zoe and Goma stare at a bush.
"Zoe, what the heck are you doing?!" yells Max.
She just stares at the bush, the shine in her eyes faded.
"Zoe! ZOE!" yells Max.
"There's... something..." she says, dazed.
"Zoe, snap out of it! This is no time to be daydreaming!" yells Rex.
A twinkle appears once more.
She flinches and gasps slightly, returning to her senses.
"What.. did I...?" she asks.
"Don't ask me." says Rex.
"Spectral punisher!" yells Sheer, activating the card.
Chomp dodges it.
Dr. Z and the alpha gang teleport to their location.
"Dr. Z?!" yells Max.
"YOU IDIOTS LEFT WITHOUT US!" he screams, ticked off.
"Sorry doctor! We had to go!" says Max.
"Shut up! I get a once-in-a-lifetime offer and YOU JUST LEAVE ME BEHIND LIKE A PIECE OF TRASH!" he screams.
"Dr. Z, calm down..." pleads Ursula.
"Yeah! We'll get pulverized if we don't keep calm!" says Zander.
"Oh, alright! Anywho, take these." he says.
He holds out a box with colored wristbands in them. Each has a matching jewel in the center.
"What the heck are these?" asks Rex.
"I created a new device that amplifies the power of the move cards! All you have to do is press the jewel in the center when activating one! It's called Dino Amplifier! Bwahahaha another brilliant invention by Dr. Z!" he yells.
"Oh geez." says Zoe.
"Well, what're we waiting for?!" yells Max, smirking.
"I'm with you, Max." says Rex.
"Alright, let's go!" yells Zoe.
They put on the wristbands.
"Ultimate Thunder!"
"Ultimate Wind!"
"Ultimate Leaf!"
The three hold up their wrists.
"Go, Dino Amplifier!" they say simultaneously.
The jewels send out shockwaves, increasing the attacks' power.
"Whoa, sweet!" yells Max, his eyes twinkling.
The attack hits, turning the three Spectral Space Pirates' dinosaurs back into dust.
"Darn, we should've known that quack doctor would give them some sort of device!" yells Foolscap.
"HEY, WHO'RE YOU CALLING A QUACK DOCTOR?!" Dr. Z yells, Ursula, Ed, and Zander restraining him.
Goma clenches his hands. "Retreat." he says.
The three other pirates swerve around.
"Are you out of your mind?!" yells Sheer.
"Sheer, what're you talking about? Goma isn't out of his mind! If he was, we'd see his brain!" says Gavro.
Foolscap slaps his head. "It's a figure of speech, dummy." he says.
"Oh, right." says Gavro.
"I know, it seems crazy, but..." says Goma. "We can't stay. Give them their parents back."
"Alright..." they say.
They all transport back.
The ship appears and their parents walk out.
Max and Zoe gasp at what they see.
Their parents are perfectly fine, including Zoe's mom.
"M-Mom? But I thought.." she stutters.
"I know. Your father had that same reaction. Apparently they left them thinking I was dead to scare them into surrendering." she says.
"B-But what's with the dummy?" asks Max, totally puzzled.
"What dummy?" she asks, confused.
"Ugh, we left the dummy there to scare you." says Sheer, annoyed.
"WHAT?! WHY YOU... UGH, I'LL KILL YOU!" Zoe screams, Max restraining her. "ARGH! Max let go of me!" she yells, struggling.
"Zoe, hold on,we shouldn't just launch in and say 'I'll kill you!' like that!" he says.
"I don't care! LET ME GO!" she says.
Max cries fake tears.
Why me...? he thinks.
The Space Pirates prepare to take off.
"Listen, we're letting you go this time, but NEXT time we won't have you!" says Max.
"Beat it." says Goma, extremely mad.
A vein pops.
"What?! YOU LITTLE- UGH! I"LL KILL YOU!" he says.
Zoe cuts him off. "Man, shut up!"
"I don't care! LET ME AT HIM!"
"Dude, you're such a hypocrite!"
"I AM NOT!"
"YES YOU ARE!"
"BOTH OF YOU SHUT UP!" yells Rex.
They flinch.
"Whoa..." they say simultaneously.
The ship takes off.
"Man, I'm beat. Who else wants to go to my place for ice cream?" asks Max.
"Sure." says Zoe.
"Oh wait, Rex do you have to leave soon?" asks Max.
"Well, we have to go back today, but it's not like right now or anything." he says.
"Great. Let's go!" Max yells.
Zoe smiles a little and then notices a twinkle in a bush.
She walks over and finds a small green crystal in the shape of the grass symbol.
"Zoe! What's taking you so long?!" Max yells.
"I'll be right there!" she yells back.
She picks up the crystal and puts into her pocket before running inside.
I wonder what it's for... she thinks.
Yo! Sooooo sorry for making you wait. How long has it been? I dunno. But still thanks for waiting and I hope you continue to read my Fanfics. Sorry if this chapter stinks I've been getting into Naruto (no thanks to my friends) and I lost some of my awesome ideas in the process. But then again, I DID get even better ideas...
Oh yeah, for those who don't really like Naruto, this series will not be affected by anything like it. Sorry for everyone who thinks Naruto is cool. I like it (well, to an extent) too.
One more thing. It might seem like the whole fight scene seemed rushed, but it's not. The whole "ending so soon" thing was part of the plot from the beginning. Just wanted to throw that out there.