To the unfortunate readers of this fic:
This is in dire need of a rewrite. I wrote it in high school, and quite frankly, it embarrasses the bejeezus outta me (Sue-ish, juvenile, things that couldn't possibly be anatomically correct, plot-holes the size of Montana). But I believe it can be saved, and I think that now is the time, now that I've grown a little, had a little more practice, as well as the drastic increase in knowledge of the gungan culture, Jar Jar himself, etc, etc, etc.
I will leave this up to give anyone who might still care (after all these years?! 2003?!) the heads up, but be warned, its days are numbered (thankfully). I don't think anyone will disagree that this is in dire need of an overhaul…
If all goes well, and I find myself with some extra time (between this and my epic Kingdom Hospital fic), there may be a sequel, as I find myself with a million ideas that nag day and night. For now, though, I'll be focusing on this rewrite (as well as my KH epic, oh my beloved KH fans).
Thanks to readers a reviewers for the kind reviews submitted. I treasure them. I do. Wow. You were really too kind. 333