I have decided to rewrite this story, in order to make it better. To make the characters less OOC, and I will be changing the the story up a bit as well.

I will be leaving the old story up for now, until I start the rewrite. However I honestly need some advice on how to make my OC, Kero Uchiha a lot better, and how to not make him a Gary-stu. Also please tell me, what I can do to make the story better as well.

However please be polite, and kind about it as you put down your advice. Lastly I know my spelling and grammar are terrible but I am seriously trying to improve this. No one is perfect, even with the help of a spellcheck.