yay,

rewrite's final here whoo

and by the way yeah i know its a little short by the other chapter will be longer and as for all thous people who are just reading this and haven't seen it before i'm not going to put something in here that only the people have read the old one will understand

Prologue:

The Boy In The Dark

Darkness. That's all that could be seen… or not seen. The room, if it was a room, was completely made of wood. Damp, rotting, cold wood on all six sides, including the floor and ceiling.

The room, or cart rather, started moving you could tell by the way the small stones and bugs jumped as the wheels went over rocks and branches sprawled out on the ground.

At first glance the cart seemed to be devoid of any human life… but if you took a little time for your eyes to adjust to the darkness of the room you could see a small figure cuddled in the corner.

The figure could not belong to someone older than 8 or 9, 10 if they were very short and skinny. The darkness made it impossible for you to see what colour hair or eyes they had but from the faint silhouette, you could just about tell that it was a male figure; a young boy.

The door swung open. A man stood there, an aura of evil around him, and the sun streamed into the cart through the gap. The boy however was not covering his face from the sudden sunlight but rather the man.

The man had broad shoulders and from his neck hung a chain of bones, human and animal alike. His attire was a thick, black leather jacket with pieces of gold and silver embedded in it; he also wore a black wolf fur coat that was just about an inch from the floor. On the bottom half of his body he wore black leather pants that were tucked into his boots. His hair was jet black and came just above shoulder length. Across his right dull blue eye, that had an evil glint about them, to his cheek is was scar,

The man walked over to the boy and dangled a small loaf of stale bread in front of him. It wasn't much but it was enough to make the boy look at it, with his staved, haunted, electric blue eyes which revealed that his soul had long since been broken.

"do you want is?" the man asked playfully and the boy slowly nodded "go ahead take it" the boy hesitantly reached for the piece of bread but just as his figures brushed against it the man harshly stanched it away and then kicked the boy hardly in the stomach making him let out a pain filled scream.

The man stuffed the bread into his mouth occasionally made sounds like "ummm' and muttering words like 'so delicious'

"ohhhh" the man made a noise of fake sympathy before saying "it looks like it all gone, I'm so sorry"

"Sir, we need to go or we might not find him" an anonymous voice shouted from outside the room and the boy froze; whether it was fear or relieve was had to tell but he froze.

"Oh don't worry you'll be reunited with your precious older brother soon" the man mocked noticing the boys reaction before leaving the room.

The boy waited from the familiar sound of the door locking but it never came to only thing that could be heard was the man's cruel voice as well as another.

The boy noticed a small stream of light coming through the door, signalling that it wasn't closed, and took his chance; however slim it maybe. He scampered to his feet and ran at the door, which swiftly opened.

"Get him" the man commanded the other men the area as the boy ran deep into the dark, sun starved forest and the men ran after him.

The boys legs and feet were aching as he ran through the forest bare footed. He didn't dare look back for fear that it would slow him down.

The men were closing on him but when the boy crossed into a small clearing and ran back into the forest on the other side, the man said "wait! The only think though there is the citadel of Camelot either the knight will find him or he'll starve to dead either way he going to die"

The men nodded and headed back to camp not knowing how wrong they were.

The boy, however, kept running but the lack of energy and his wounds made him slow to a halt. The boy allowed himself to glance behind himself before promptly collapsing on the floor with a loud thud.

so thous who've read the old one with first chapter do you prefer and if you haven't read the old one did you like it

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese tell me

seeya

p.s for thous who have read the old one i wont be doing him with a capital 'H'