Dear readers,

There comes a time when someone is writing that they feel an urge, based on someone's comment, to rewrite. I've been told that this story is rushed and the characters are OOC, and so I'm considering rewriting it so it's not so rushed. They're right; Danny told Dash way too much at the beginning, and that's just not what he would do. But, I know that people have been waiting for updates, so I'm going to leave it up to you:

Should I re-write this story? Or should I continue on as-is, regardless of how OOC everyone is being? When I first did this, it was simply for the sake of doing it. Therefore, I didn't have much inspiration for a while. But now that I have people asking for me to update, and someone commented that everything is rushed and OOC, I think I might have enough inspiration to do a decent rewrite. A lot of things will change, such as how early on they have romantic/sexual encounters. I will also be focusing more on the story than on the sexual stuff, and so most of it will be implied unless something happens in the scene aside from the sex.

I'm leaving this up to you, the readers, and will see how many people ask to keep it as-is and how many ask for a re-write.
I await your answers. ~ Zone