Hello, everyone🐺😄! It's me, Cyberbee15🐺 ! I am so sorry I haven't updated in a long time🐺 . I've been battling with depression and loneliness for a while and sometimes it's hard for me to deal with it on my own🐺🙁. I guess I'll always be a late updater sorry, everyone🙁🐺.
Well, anyway here's my improved chapter 1 for Day's and Night's Adventures🐺😉! Let's see if anyone can spot the differences in the improved version🐺 .

In the Hoenn region, there stood the largest mountain in the region, Mount Evermore in a place called Nature Valley. the Hoen regions most beautiful natural wonder and in the mountain, in the middle of a large lake there stands an island the only ones who live are Pokémon. By Pokemon, I mean cloned Pokémon. All of them were preparing for Winter they were gathering all the food they could find in their area. The leaves began to change colors which meant only one thing, winter was going to hit very soon. There on top of a ledge stood a very powerful Pokémon named Mewtwo. Watching from above in case of danger.

''Pika!''

Pikachutwo came running very quickly. She was rushing by all the other clones and almost got stepped on by Charizardtwo! Luckily, he missed the electric mouse by an inch.

"There must be trouble."

Mewtwo levitated himself down quickly.

"What is it?"

Pikachutwo finally stopped to catch her breath, spoke to her leader and told him about what she saw while looking for food.

Flashback

Pikachutwo was grabbing some delicious looking berries then got thirsty. So she went to the river to get a drink. But when Pikachutwo came to the flowing stream, her eyes caught something very unusual. When that something was identified, Pikachutwo ran back home as quickly as possible!

End of flashback

By the time Pikachutwo was done explaining everything, she was gasping due to being out of breath. All of the other clones were worried that they were discovered yet again! At that moment, the first cloned Pokemon knew what needed to be done.

"(Nodding head) I understand."

Mewtwo knew the possible danger of this situation.

"Take us there immediately!"

Mewtwo gathered some volunteers to come with him. They were Pikachu two, Meowthtwo, Sandslashtwo, Ninetailstwo, and Hitmonleetwo. These brave volunteers and Mewtwo followed the cloned Electric-type to the location she was at. What they saw shocked them, even Mewtwo. Right in front of their eyes was a ship! It was broken from top to bottom, the flag was ripped, its pole was broken in half, the ship's front spear was completely broken off. There was a crack in the middle of the ship, large enough for all of them to fit in. So they waited and waited. Then finally, after five minutes Mewtwo levitated himself up on a rock to get everyone's attention. Which worked, when all the volunteers looked up, Mewtwo was going to tell them the plan.

"Everyone, ready yourselves! For we do not know if there is anyone or thing in that beat up old wreak. But none the less, be prepared for we are going in that ship!"

The clone Pokémon nodded their heads understanding the situation as well as the danger that might be awaiting them. Mustering their courage, they all went in the broken old wreak.

The group proceeded with caution. Not knowing if something or someone will jump them. Just then, Mewtwo stopped. The others stopped as well.

"Shh! I really do hear something, friends. Be ready."

Mewtwo kept his eyes and ears open for the cause of the sound. The other cloned Pokémon were all quiet and looking around everywhere. They were all beginning to hear something and it sounded like someone was chuckling. When Mewtwo turned around, he saw an upside down creepy face with its tongue out!

"Ah!"

Mewtwo placed his hand over his heart. When he saw who it was, the startled psychic type glared at the jokester. Who was none other than a Haunter, laughing loudly by the fact that he scared a bunch of suckers!

"Never mind, everyone. It is just a foolish trickster playing his games of scaring others for laughs."

Mewtwo's glare deepened as the Ghost-type continued to laugh.

"Come. Let us leave this ship."

When that was finished, the cloned leader and his friends were about to leave, when Haunter came in front of them. He apologized and told them he found something in the upper chamber of the ship that was very important. Mewtwo listened carefully just in case he was planning another joke. But when Haunter was done telling everyone, Mewtwo heard sincerity in the jokester's voice, which meant, what he said was true.

With his mind made up, Mewtwo sighed .

"Very well, take us to this upper chamber. (In a warning tone)) However, if this is another joke, you will be in for a painful experience."

Haunter chuckled weakly with his hands in the air. Understanding what Mewtwo meant. The trickster began to lead them to the upper chamber.

When he said it was on the upper chamber, he wasn't kidding. The chamber was so high up, the group could see the sky through one of the holes on the deck. Luckily, the stairs to the chamber were still sturdy enough to hold them. By the time everyone got there, they were all out of breath except for Mewtwo, who levitated himself the whole way and Haunter who didn't need to walk. Mewtwo cracked the door open slightly, just enough to see if it was safe. When he saw no signs of danger, Mewtwo opened the door all the way. They all looked inside to see what the chamber was like. It had a bed, a table, a window which was cracked a bit and some of the glass from it was everywhere. But what really got their attention, was a crib in the middle of the room, a blanket was covering it. After a few seconds, something was stirring underneath the blanket.

"Everyone, wait here; I will see what it is under that blanket."

The first cloned Pokemon floated quietly to the crib.

When he was close enough, Mewtwo took the blanket off swiftly only to see…to see…two small babies.

"(Gasped)What? Human babies?!"

True to the Genetic Pokémon's word, they were indeed humans. One was a girl, whose skin was paler than the moon and black hair. By the looks of things, she was alright. Next, was a boy. His skin was a light beige color and tan hair. He was alright as well. Both sound asleep, curled into each other. Mewtwo's mouth was agape. The Genetic Pokemon didn't expect to see two human babies all alone, on a beat-up old ship. Pikachutwo and Meowthtwo climbed up on his shoulders to see what he was looking at and then their mouths were agape too. At that moment, the sleeping babies began to stir, then their eyes began to open. The girl had light blue eyes while the boy's eyes were blue. they looked up to see Mewtwo and the other clones. Both the little children squealed with joy at having to see someone, even though they didn't know what these creatures were, they sure liked them. Both the small children stretched out their little hands wanting to be held.

Mewtwo stretched out his hands slowly and carefully, so not to scare them and in case they had hidden injuries. The powerful psychic type brought the infants to his chest, both snuggled in the warmth of it. Then the little ones looked up to see the two clone Pokémon sitting on his shoulders. The girl reached up to pet Pikachutwo, but could not reach. So the yellow mouse leaned down a bit, the girl began to pet Pikachutwo, and both of them were loving every minute of it. Next, the boy began to reach up to pet Meowth two. Unlike his sister, he could reach the cat Pokémon just fine. Meowth two began to purr with glee. The two small children laughed with happiness.

"If these two children are here all alone, that must mean either they were left here while everyone else escaped, or were simply forgotten. Poor things."

Mewtwo sighed with sadness, seeing such sweet children here all alone.

The other cloned Pokémon bowed their heads in sadness as well. Just then, Pikachutwo had an idea

''Pikachu pika pi!'' "What? I should adopt them?"

Mewtwo asked her to see if he heard correctly. She nodded her head swiftly looking at the other cloned Pokémon to see if they agreed with the idea. The group nodded their heads saying it was a great idea. All of them loved the children and wanted them to stay! Mewtwo nodded his head as well.

"(Nodding with a smile) Very well. We will take them into our family, but first, we must name them."

Mewtwo looked at the girl in his left arm, seeing she was paler than the moon, a name came to him for her!

"You, my daughter. Who is beautiful and deep as the night shall be named Lunara Rise."

Yes, indeed. The name suited the little girl very well. Next, he turned his head to the boy, who was in his right arm. The boy had more color then Lunara and had a big smile on his little face.

"As for you, my son. Who is small yet strong and bright, you shall be named Erik Rise."

By the time Mewtwo was done naming the children, both of them had fallen to sleep with smiles on their faces. The powerful psychic type smiled as well at seeing his new children asleep in his arms.

''Haunter haunt unt unt?'' Haunter asked if he could come along. He liked the two human infants and would miss making them laugh with his faces. Mewtwo agreed the ghost type could come along. As long as he would not cause trouble. Haunter put his right hand on his heart, raised his left hand in the air, and promised he would behave as best as he could.

With all that said and done, everyone left the ship. At the moment they all got out of the broken old ship, waves came in big and strong enough to move the old wreak back out into the sea. To where no one knew or cared. However, all the Pokemon were relieved and happy. Not only would they not be discovered, but they also had two wonderful little children to play with and love.

OK, Everyone, that's it for the rewritten chapter🐺😉! Be on the lookout for my first Christmas special chapter🐺😉!

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