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I have come with a new story. The idea is not mine. This is based on a true story. The love story which remained unfinished.
Now come to the story.
Pyar ki ek adhuri dastan
Night 11:45 PM
A guy called a girl.
On Phone:
Girl: kitni raat ho gayi hai. Tumne phir kyon phone kiya? Thori der pehle hi to humne Baat ki thi na!
Guy: tumhe bura laga? Ok. Rakhta hoon.
Girl: Ager tumne phone cut kiya na to main tumse Baat nahi karungi.
Guy: tumne hi to Kaha itni raat ko Maine tumhe phone kyon kiya? Ab jab Maine Kaha rakhta hoon to kehte ho ki Baat nahi karoge. Huh! Tum larkiya na impossible ho.
The girl smiled at his comment. But showed fake anger.
Girl(fake anger): tum na bohot bure ho. Jao Mujhe tumse Baat nahi Karni hai.
Guy: are are gussa kyon karti ho Tarika. Main to baas aise keh rah tha.
Tarika: main bhi aise keh rahi thi(smilingly). Lekin main tumse abhi bhi naraz hu Abhijeet.
Abhi(confused): ab kya hua meri maa?
Tarika: tumne tab phone cut kyon kiya?
Abhi: Wo Daya ka call aaya tha land line per. Kuch zaruri Baat karna tha. To isiliye...
I m sorry na Tarika. Ab gussa chor do.
Tarika: acha thik hai maaf kiya.
Both of them smiled. Tarika: Abhijeet, 12 baj Gaye hai.
Abhi: Haan. Toh?
Tarika: Happy birthday to u Abhijeet. Many many happy returns of the day.
Abhijeet becomes quiet.
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Tarika: Abhi tum aise chup kyon ho?
Abhi: baas tumhare bare mein soch raha tha. Mera birthday, Mujhe yaad nahi. Per tumhe yaad hai. (Smiling)
Tarika also smiled at this. Tarika: tumhe kaam se fursat milega tab to yaad rahega.
Abhi: tum ho na yaad rakh ne k liye. (In flirty tone)
Tarika: Abhijeet tum phir se shuru ho gaye!
Abhi: waise Tarika tum mere birthday pe kya dene wali ho?
Tarika: Jo tum mango ge wohi milega.
Abhi: pakka milega na?
Tarika: ha baba. Pakka milega.
Abhi: tum mera ek kaam kardo phir.
Tarika: Jo bologe kar dungi.
Abhi: sach?
Tarika: much.
AbhiRika smiled.
Tarika: ab bolo bhi ki kya kaam karna hai...
Abhi: Tarika, main ek larki se pyar karta hoon. Bohot pyar karta hoon. Per ab tak kuch bola nahi use. Use bolne mein mere madat karoge?
Tarika was shocked at this. She became quiet at once. She felt like her world has come to an end.
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Abhi: kya hua Tarika? Tum ek daam se yun silent mode per chali gayi!
Tarika came back to earth listening his voice.
Tarika: ha...ha..Abhijeet.
Abhi: tum sun rahe ho na Tarika?
Tarika(with so much pain): haan. Sun rahi hoon.
After a pause, Tarika(sad tone): wo fortunate girl kon hai?
Abhi: tumhare gale ko kya hua? Aise kaap kyon rahe ho? Sab thik to hai na?
Tarika: nahi sab thik hai. Kon hai wo larki?
Abhi: hai koi khas. Tum jante ho use.
Tarika(surprised): main janti hoon? Kon hai wo? Tum usse apna dil k Baat bolte kyon nahi?
Abhi: dar lagta hai. Kahi wo mujhse naraz ho gayi toh? Ager Baat karna band kar Diya toh?
Tarika: are aise kaise. Tumhe koi mana thodi na karega. Aur Ager kar bhi diya toh main usse samjhaungi. Aj tumne mujse kuch manga hai aur tumhe wo jarur milega.
Abhi: sach much milega na?
Tarika: are ha baba milega. Ab...ab... batao.. wo wo lar...ki kon hai?
Tarika was trying hard to control her emotions for Abhijeet. But Abhijeet could understand her very well. Abhijeet decided to tell her everything.
Abhi: pehle promise karo ki tum mujhse naraz nahi hoge aur baat karna band nahi karoge.
Tarika: hmmm. Ok promise.
Abhijeet became quiet suddenly. He was trying to tell her but again again failed.
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Tarika: ab bolo ge bhi ya phir Senior Inspector Abhijeet ko suspense barkarer rakhna hai?
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Abhi(taking a deep breath): i love u.
Tarika(shocked): what? Ye kaisa naam hai. Kisika naam ye bhi hota hai kya?
Abhi(irrited): oh my God! Tarika tumhe ye bhi samjh nahi aya?
Tarika's mind suddenly became sharp and she understood what he had said just a moment ago. Tarika was now more shocked and surprised.
Tarika(still not bilieving): Abhijeet tumne abhi kya bola? Jara phir se bolo.
Abhi: i have said that i love u. The girl is none other than u.
Tarika: Abhi tum mazak to nahi kar rahe ho na?
Abhi: (A bit loud)...I LOVE YOU TARIKA.
Tarika was now in the heaven. Tarika was smiling with tears.
Tarika: i love u too Abhijeet...
Abhijeet also smiled. But suddenly Tarika became angry.
Tarika: Abhi tum mujhe ye baat pehle nahi bata sakte the? Aur ye kya pehlia bana raha the. Pata hai meri jaan nikal ja raha tha tumhari baate sunker. Ager sach mein tumhare zindegi mein koi aur larki hota to? Mera kya hota? Main to jeete jee marr...
Abhijeet cutted her. Abhi: are Tarika saans to lo. Aur aise kaise mere life mein koi aur larki ata. Haan!
Tarika(same angry tone): phir tumne mujhe pehle kyon nahi bataya?
Abhi: mujhe laga ki ager tum mujhse pyar nahi karti ho to tum mujhse baat karna band kar doge. Hamara dosti bhi tor doge. Isiliye...(a bit embarrased)
Tarika smiled at him. Tarika: hmmm.,,samajh gayi. (Again angry): per Abhijeet tumne ye bilkul thik nahi kiya. Main ab tumse baat nahi karungi. Phone rakho.
Abhijeet immedietly without waisting a second: tumne mujhse promise kiya hai ki tum mujhse naraz nahi hogi. Phir naraz kyon ho rahi ho?
Tarika remebered her words.
Tarika: oh. Ok. Jayo maaf kiya. Per ek shart hai.
Abhi: kya?
Tarika: kal tumhe mujhe film dikhane le jana hoga.
Abhi: jo hukum mere aka.
Both of them shared a laugh.
Abhijeet again start the conversation: acha Tarika, tum shaadi ki baad bhi aise hi laroge kya mujhse?
Tarika blushed listening the word "shaadi".
Tarika: ha larungi. Per kabhi kabhi. (Shyly): aur aur..tumhe wo karungi.
Abhi(confused): wo?
Tarika(blushing): are budhu wo karungi?
Abhi(irritated): are kya wo wo laga rakah hai! Bolo bhi ye WO kya hai?
Tarika(in one breath): KISS karungi aur kya!
Abhi became shocked and surprised too. Tarika was blushing hard. Abhijeet became a bit naughty too.
Abhi(in naughty tone): to hum bhi karenge tumko pyar.
Tarika(shy): Abhi ab baas karo. Koi aur baat karte hai.
Abhi; tumne hi to topic start kiya! Waise Tarika tum apne sapno mein bhi mujhe Kiss wiss karte ho kya?
Tarika: Abhijeet shut up. Ab main phone rakhti hoon.
Abhi: thodi der aur baat karo na plz.
Tarika: nahi kal Lab bhi jana hai. Aur tumhe bhi to bureau jana hai.
Abhi: ok. Phir kal milenge. Lunch hour mein main tumhara wait karunga cafeteria k bahar. Main half day leave le lunga. Phir milke film dekhne chalenge.
Tarika: thik hai. Main ajaungi. Good night Abhi.
Abhi: good night.
Both of them smiled and cut the phone.
Here Abhi got a call from Daya. Daya wished him Happy birthday. Abhi told him that he had told Tarika his feelings and she also felt same about him.
Daya: mujhe toh pehle hi pata tha ki Tarika bhi tujhse pyar karti hai. Tu hi to dar raha tha use bolne mein.
Abhi: ha yaar. Jo huya so hua. Ab to use bol hi diya hai aur kal hum dono lunch time mein milenge.
Daya: are wah! (Teasingly): mere boss ka pehla meeting hai propose karne k baad? Kya baat hai!
Abhi(blushed): tu chup kar Daya. Jab tere bari ayegi tab samjhega tu.
Daya laughed. Daya: tab ki tab dekhenge.
Abhi: good night yaar.
Daya: good night. Chal kal bureau mein details mein tere proposal ki kahani sunege (naughtily).
Before Abhi could reply anything Daya cut the call.
Abhi smiled and said: ye bhi na bilkul pagal hai.
Abhijeet laid down on bed. But he could not sleep that ni8. Here was the same story was with Tarika. AbhiRika were all awake that ni8 thinking of each other and the moments that they had spent with each other.
In this story's starting, AbhiRika r very close friend. Abhijeet sometimes flirted with Tarika in lab. But Tarika thought hat Abhijeet did it to irritate Dr. Salunkhe. But Abhijeet actually did that to parise Tarika. And ab to Tarika ko bhi pata chal gaya that Abhijeet loves her and ap logo ko bhi :p
OH! At last Update kar diya. Socha ki OS likhungi. Per bohot long ho jayega. So isko OC bana diya. Ye to baas story ki shuruwat hai. Age age dekho hota hai kya!
Sorry to Krittika di. Di OS ki boli thi per OC likh rahi hu.
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I have exams. So i will take time to update. Hope readers u won't mind.
And plzzzz do review to encourage me.