Hey everyone who has read my story before or have just recently discovered due to the update!

THIS IS NOT AN ABANDONING NOTICE! THIS IS NOT AN ABONDONING NOTICE!

good that's out of the way. Soooooooooooo its been awhile, like three years right? {awkwardly waves at pissed fans}

Ok then, well just to clarify again, this is not an abandoning notice. Its actually a revamp notice.

I adore all of you for saying my story was good even though reading it again myself after three years I was like "the hell, people actually read this terrible thing?"

Some of you might be like "oh dont beat yourself up, it wasn't that bad", {gives you all the challenge excepted look}

Lets start with the plot through out the 14 chapters. I was rushing the whole story through as fast as possible I think I got whiplash from it, then there is bad dramatics in there. I was teasing with more secrets then I was actually telling you some stuff, too many secrets or plot ideas thrown at you all in one go isn't good, it just makes the story so overwhelming. Add the whiplash speed to my story and its just not all that amazing.

Characters, I need to work on harry. I have him right but the words I had just weren't cutting it. Then Hermione, I'm stating this now, I didn't mean to rush the whole potion thing right there. I have no clue why I did, another example of rushing the plot. It was supposed to wait for later, and because I didn't her character itself suffered. Now Ron . . . . I dont hate the guy I just wouldn't of minded him dying in third year like jk rowling thought to do. Reading the story and comparing it to the plot I had in mind, the two are not together. The Ron in the story became a villain way way to early and in a way he wasn't even supposed to be a villain. Same with Dumbledore, you guys had one scene with him and he obliviated Harry. My plot wasn't to make him an antagonist but low and behold my wording and lack of telling things correctly made him into the stereotypical bad Dumbledore. ummmmmm, anyone else? I guess I need to work on Dobby but I just dont know how to work a hyperactive super harry fan but make him say "What can dobby to for the great magnificent wonderful powerful caring thoughtful harry potter sir?" LOL

If you all haven't figured it out yet, I am redoing the story. Im keeping this one up here as a reminder to myself on just how bad I did and also for you all to read the new one then go back to the old one and compare them.

I have read the reviews and I thought it was funny that after reading my story and seeing the flaws the reviews said the same thing. I guess I thought I was fixing them when I reality I was probably making it worse. Except the dragons part in the Triwizard tournament, I think I did a pretty good job, hopefully. I had also noted that a lot of reviewers told me to stop shouting at them with the authors notes. MY BAD, PEOPLE, MY BAD. I am also keeping the old story for the author notes, I think they are amusing and my friend said they were like a mini story within the story so hey I might continue my little author note shenanigans.

Some of you might be wondering, "What changed CainLionheart?"

Honestly? mostly grammer right now since I am just now working on remastering chapter 2. The way it is done and how it is presented is like half the story, which I failed at miserable in my search for greatness on this site, but I am much stronger in the way I say things now thanks to . . . . . . Grammarly! {Heroic music in the background} honestly people, it is really amazing. I suggest if for anyone and everyone!

Moving on {Sounds of music instruments breaking}, I know you guys be hesitant but just give it one more shot. I will be posting the first chapter on "Magic and Daggers" (2.0)

{Car salesman music} So come on down and try to read it, for those who favorited me already have a swift link to find my page and get to it. To those just finding this story and haven't favorited yet, well dont, there is much a better deal right at my page. All you have to do is click my name and poof your their looking at my stories ive made, {grabs random kid} its that easy kid!

"MOOOOM a stranger just grabbed me"

{Angry mom shows up} Ah mam, could I interest you in reading - {Pepper sprayed in the eyes}

Ahhhhhhhhhh it burns, it truly burns

{Mom and child walk away from creepy fourth wall salesman}

Ugh anywho {Blinks eyes terribly ignoring the pain} you know what to do and how to get there, hope to see you soon.

{Walks away in hopes of finding an aid for his pepper sprayed eyes}

Magic and Daggers (Version 1.0)

Retired: Aug. 24, 2015

R.I.P.

Dec. 11, 2014 - Sept. 4, 2018

"The first step always counts"I was CainLionhearts first step