Alright people here we go this is the re-write of my story Naruto Of The Rinnegan

as i do with most of my stories first chapters i will point out that Grammar is not one of my strong points

Also i wish to apologize now for any language butchering i do in this story i used google translate so there is a fair chance that some of the words are incorrect and more then likely wrong so i am sorry to anyone who actually speaks Japanese (If anyone knows actual translations feel free to let me know)

I do not own Naruto

Naruto Uzumaki, the dobe of the Konoha Academy sat in the corner of his classroom he had just got into class with five minutes to spare. The fourteen year old blond sat in the back corner at a table all by himself as he had no friends to sit with which wasn't surprizing to him he hid everything about himself under a façade of idiocy that included his skills, his looks, his intelligence and even his adoptive family, no one in the village except him, the Hokage, Anko and Kurenai knew Naruto was adopted several years ago by the secret couple. Naruto hated hiding everything but it was for the best, but it would change as soon as he graduated. Once he graduated he planned to reveal everything. Naruto was cut from his musings when he heard the door open and in strolled Sasuke Uchiha the class's rookie of the year, he was a dark boy always brooding, or at least that's what he had been like since his clan was killed one night by his own brother. Naruto knew they boy had his secrets and there was something big he tried to keep hidden, Sasuke was always under a Henge (Transformation) Naruto could tell, and at the first opportunity he would call out the boy on it but that would have to wait as again the door opened but this time revealing one Iruka Umino the class's chunin instructor. Everyone finished their conversations quickly and moved to use all of the open seats, except the two by Naruto. The blond sighed, the only friends he had that were his own age were thousands of kilometres away in Suna and Kumo respectively. Everyone paid attention as Iruka began to speak.

"Alright everyone before we begin today we begin today we have a new student joining us today" said Iruka, this caused Anger to erupt from some.

"WHAT how come they haven't had to be here for any of the other crap they can just come and join our class a week before graduations?" roared Kiba Inuzuka, Naruto thought very little of the loud obnoxious dog boy, he smelt bad and was overly arrogant with very few redeeming traits not to mention he was dumb as a doorknob although that might be a little insulting … to doorknobs.

"Because Kiba she has only just come to Konoha recently and was actually supposed to join this class after graduation but she insisted in joining now" said Iruka.

"Where's she from?" asked Ino, Naruto hated Ino with a passion. Loud annoying fan girl were the only words to describe the girl.

"She is from Suna now instead of asking me questions you can ask her" said Iruka before the door opened and a girl walked in.

"Gaia-Chan?" questioned Naruto as soon as he laid eyes on the girl who's eyes shot to the origin of the voice.

"Naru-kun" said the girl with a smile on her face. The girl had long scruffy red hair tied into a ponytail, she had light green blue pupil-less eyes with black rings around her eyes, she wore a red shirt that went from just above her navel to just above her C-cup breasts over which she wore a beige vest that went over her left shoulder and down to just above her navel, she wore a pair of fishnet leggings and a two layered skirt the bottom layer being black and the top layer being red the top layer was divided into two parts one on each side with about a 5 centimetre gap at the front and back separating them and on her back she carried a gourd.

"Oh you two know each other?" questioned Iruka.

"Uh huh" said Gaia nodding enthusiastically, Naruto just nodded still not believing what he was seeing.

"Well Gaia why don't you tell us about yourself?" suggested Iruka.

"What do you want to know?" asked Gaia, before Iruka could speak Sakura Haruno spoke up.

"Why are you In Konoha?" asked Sakura, Gaia smiled and simply pointed to Naruto.

"You're here for Naruto-Baka?" questioned Sakura, at this the smile Gaia had been wearing the whole time dropped.

"What did you call him?" questioned Gaia in a dangerous tone.

"Naruto-Baka" said Sakura who apparently didn't hear the tone in Gaia's voice, Gaia's hair shadowed her eyes as she raised her hand slowly. At speeds no-one had seen from him Naruto was at the front holding Gaia's hand in his own, she looked at him with a slight dusting of pink on her cheeks only to see him shake his head. Gaia looked a little sad and stepped back holding her arms apart and doing the Puppy dog eyes no jutsu.

"That's not fair Gaia-chan" said Naruto, Gaia didn't even flinch. Naruto sighed and smiled before stepping forwards and hugging Gaia who hugged him back tightly.

"I missed you Gaia-Chan" said Naruto.

"I missed you more Naru-kun" said Gaia as she hugged him her eyes were shut tight, after a moment the duo was interrupted by a cough from Iruka.

"You two about done?" questioned Iruka Naruto just glared at the man.

"No but the rest can wait" said Gaia.

"How does a dobe like you know a hot chick like her?" questioned Kiba, Naruto growled.

"You know what I told myself I would wait till graduation before doing this but you're all pissing me off" growled Naruto before snapping his fingers and was engulfed in a plume of smoke like he was undoing a transformation, once the smoke cleared Naruto looked almost completely different. Naruto now had spikey blond hair with red streaks in it and red tips to the spikes, Naruto now wore a white hooded short sleaved jumper, black shorts, black arm warmers and white combat boots, also strapped to his back a black Nodachi almost as long as he was tall. No one could tell if Naruto's eyes were different because they were shut tight but there was a scar running over the inside of Naruto's left eye and Naruto now had much more pronounced incisors being more like fangs then teeth and the boy's skin was a bit paler. Naruto's eyes snapped open and he glared at Kiba.

"Outside now" ordered Naruto, everyone just stared at his new eyes they all lilac with a ripple like pattern radiating from the centre where there was a slit for a pupil instead of a circle. That combined with Naruto's new look made him look downright intimidating.

"Aw poor little dobe thinks he can beat me" said Kiba as if talking to a baby. Naruto simply ignored Kiba in favour of walking outside, Kiba and the rest of the class followed, including Iruka and Mizuki. Once everyone was outside Naruto and Kiba, with Akamaru on his head, wandered over to the sparing ring.

"Rules dobe?" questioned Kiba.

"Anything goes mutt" said Naruto. Kiba growled at Naruto.

"Begin" said Iruka starting the match he was just as enthralled as the rest of those present.

Kiba began circling Naruto, who was standing in the middle, like a hunter stalking its prey. Naruto stood there motionless as Kiba circled him. Once Kiba got behind Naruto into the blond's blind spot he lunged at the blond lashing out at the boy's head. Naruto simply ducked under the slow attack, and let the Inuzuka fly over him, as soon as Kiba landed he launched at Naruto again in a fury of swipes, Kiba swiped at the redhead's head, neck, arms, shoulders, legs anywhere and everywhere that he could and every time he missed. Naruto simply ducked dodged and weaved around the attacks. Kiba seeing the ease at which Naruto was dodging his attacks swiped faster and faster going as fast as he could and yet Naruto was still easily dodging him.

"FIGHT BACK DAMN IT FIGHT BACK" yelled Kiba. Naruto rolled his eyes at the young Inuzuka and continued to avoid the attacks thrown his way. Naruto stepped back from the young Inuzuka who ran forwards at Naruto, only for said blond to spin around Kiba and finally launch a punch at the Inuzuka. Naruto hit Kiba in the back sending him rolling forwards sprawled out on the floor. Kiba glared at Naruto.

"Lucky shot" growled Kiba standing back up

"Shikyaku no Jutsu (Four legs technique)" called Kiba dropping to the ground as his already feral appearance became more so, Kiba then tossed his now dismounted dog a pill which Akamaru promptly ate making his fur go red

"Jūjin Bunshin (Man Beast Clone)" Called Kiba as Akamaru jumped onto the dog boy's back before in a plume of smoke Akamaru was replaced with a second Kiba

"Get rid of it damn it, one was bad enough" said Naruto causing everyone present to laugh at Kiba both of whom growled at the comment before both of the Kibas lunged at Naruto continually swiping at him, Naruto just ducked, dodged and weaved around the attacks both Kibas eventually jumped back and glared at Naruto who stood between them.

"Are we fighting yet?" asked Naruto earning a growl from Kiba.

Kiba and Akamaru ran forwards at Naruto before they started to violently spin.

"Gatsūga (Fang Over Fang)" called Kiba as he and Akamaru spun at Naruto. Naruto jumped backwards avoiding the cyclones that were Kiba and Akamaru, but then the two cyclones turned to Naruto.

"Oh he can turn" said Naruto who simply stood there and let the two cyclones come at him. The cyclones drew ever and ever closer to Naruto who didn't do anything to move. When the two cyclones hit Naruto there was the sound of flesh hitting metal and two howls of pain were heard as they cyclones diverted course and stopped spinning to reveal both Kibas looking down at their hands.

"Hurts don't it" said Naruto looking board.

"WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO?" screamed Kiba.

"Nothing you did it all yourself" said Naruto.

"Why you" said Kiba going to attack Naruto again but in the blink of an eye said blond was in front of Kiba.

"Now get this into your thick head mutt" said Naruto slamming his fist into Kiba's gut, making said boy double over in pain and cough up saliva and a little bit of blood. The other Kiba ran over to them only for Naruto to spin around in a blur and hit the second Kiba with his fist sending Akamaru out of the ring rolling and spinning as the Jūjin Bunshin was dispelled. The students then all saw that Naruto has lightning on his arm.

"I am not a dobe, I can kick your ass and if you piss me off again I will put you in the hospital for a month" said Naruto as the lightning danced up and down his arm. Kiba couldn't even nod he just lay there and let unconsciousness take him.

"Winner Naruto" said Iruka, Naruto jumped back and landed next to Gaia.

"Now given that we're all out here let's get today's Taijutsu going" said Iruka.

"Now first up we'll have Gaia and Sakura" said Iruka.

"Is this straight taijutsu?" asked Gaia.

"Yes Gaia why?" questioned Iruka.

"I don't know any taijutsu" said Gaia.

"What how could Suna not have taught you Taijutsu?" questioned Iruka.

"This…" said Naruto throwing his fist in the general direction of Gaia when his fist got within a metre sand shot out of the gourd and stopped Naruto's hand.

"Is why" said Naruto.

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