Did you spot any grammatical errors in the Warriors books?
Maybe there were one or two mistakes, but I cannot recall them.
If anyone can spot a grammatical mistake, it would be me.
In this futuristic AU, Lightningclan are the descendants of Thunderclan.
Novakit, having a prefix future cats would learn over time, is the son of Hillwhisper, a tom, and Henfeather. (She's a she-cat, if you honestly wanted to know.) He is the brother of Mazekit, a tom, and Bloomkit, a she-kit.
Lightningclanners are the only ones who made up a written alphabet and language- it's called Light Space.
Kits learn their grammar and such at two moons old; it's best to learn early.
Here we see Novakit, Mazekit, and Bloomkit reading from the Kit Book - Punctuation, Pronunciation, and Grammar.
The three kits are four moons old, which means they're old enough to learn grammar.
Chapter One~ Intro to Characters and Teachings
Novakit sat in the nursery; the bored kit was staring at the uneven sheets of paper that taught kits about written rules of grammar and such. Novakit and his siblings knew the alphabet already; they finished learning it at two-and-a-quarter-moons old, like all kits.
Now Novakit's mother Henfeather came into the nursery; Mazekit and Bloomkit were trailing behind her.
"Hello, Novakit!" The three cats greeted. Novakit bowed his head. "Hello, Henfeather, Mazekit, and Bloomkit."
Henfeather nodded in approval when Novakit looked up. "Right now, we will start Unit 3 of Kit Book- P, P, and G."
Henfeather padded slowly past the papers, scanning them for 'Grammar' in big letters.
"Here we are!" She smiled as she sat in front of a sheet slightly larger than most others. "Unit Three- Grammar. Chapter One- You're, Your, and Yore."
Soak in this info- you're going to be thanking me for centuries.
Anyway, I made this so that you might not confuse yourselves too much while writing. Many times when you mess up, you don't realize it. This could be because you're too busy or just don't care.
Don't worry anymore! Mama's here to help!
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