Well, guys… you asked for it, you got it! The Dual Hinata Action Omake!
To be completely honest this was the one prompt I was least looking forward to write. I don't believe in writing smut for smut's sake, and one of the main reasons I am so into NaruHina is because of the love and chemistry that Naruto and Hinata have. I really didn't know how I was supposed to have Hinata and her shadow-clone make out, without making it a serious OOC moment. Hinata only has eyes for Naruto, and kissing her shadow-clone doesn't seem like something she would do and enjoy naturally.
Furthermore, I work in the biology field and I happen to know that the closer you are to somebody genetically, the less likely you are to enjoy kissing them, let alone having sex with them. So, no matter what you saw in "Yosuga No Sora" and other similar ecchi/hentai titles, kissing someone who is genetically identical to you (in this case a shadow clone) is not something that comes out naturally. Sure, Naruto is a manga and not real life, but I just couldn't ignore that little bit of scientific trivia.
(If you want to find out more about the subject just google "MHC" and "Kissing" and click on the Wikipedia article on MHC and sexual selection -hey, who said that reading smut fics didn't teach you anything!)
But then I had a few headcannons and I have found a way to bypass that sort of problem!
In other news, the non-fanfic project I was working on was an english fandub for Hinata's character song "Fuyu No Owari Ne". So if you see an English version of the song floating around on youtube one of those days… I am the one that actually wrote the lyrics! I believe they turned out quite well, considering that the song has plenty of special nuances in the way it's supposed to be sung. Hopefully, recording will be done by the time I get to do the "Hinata POV" bonus chapter in "More than Enough".
I would like to give Not-So-Gentlefist some special thanks for the omake he sent me! It was brilliant!
OK, enough for now! On with the show…
"Spoken Dialogue"
'Thoughts'
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What a difference a sideway glance makes…
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Hinata grabbed her clone's hand and led her near Naruto.
"OK, you can join us. But we will lay down some rules."
"What kind of rules?"
"First of all, I'm not into that whole twincest… clonecest… whatever you want to call it, so…"
Cloned!Hinata briefly glanced over and looked at Naruto's face.
"Neither am I, but… Naruto looks disappointed."
The original Hinata looked behind her back and also had a good look at Naruto's facial expression. It was clear to her that he was imagining stuff, and he was somewhat disappointed that something he had in mind wasn't going to happen.
"Don't tell me…"
"You actually want me…"
"To make out with my clone?"
Naruto started fidgeting with his fingers in a very Hinata-like manner, as he tried to explain himself.
"Well… You-You are the most be-beautiful and se-sexy woman I know, and n-now there's t-two of you in he-here… and it-it's like a fa-fantasy I always had and…"
The two Hinatas shouted in unison.
"Hentai!"
Naruto's face dropped.
"Sorry… It's just a fantasy I had… Never mind…"
Hinata gave him a quick kiss on the cheek. She smiled at him warmly while caressing his hair softly.
"You have already proven that you can tell me apart from my clone…"
"So… I guess…"
"We can forget about playing games…"
The two Hinatas stood up again and Hinata gave Naruto a very warm smile, while her clone looked at him, somewhat dejectedly and then looked back at her. They hugged each other closely and bought their lips together.
They tried kissing…
They tried deepening the kiss…
It didn't work. The kiss didn't feel good to them.
Hinata had always wondered why the Hyugas weren't that big on kissing when kissing her husband always felt so great and wonderful. But now that she attempted to kiss her shadow clone she finally understood why she didn't get to see a lot of kissing within the Hyuga compound… Kissing someone who is closely related to you is not something that you naturally enjoy.
The two Hinatas tried to kiss once more…
…Nothing…
…This clearly didn't work.
"OK, it seems like we can't just do it like this."
"We still want to give Naruto a good show though."
"Do you have any ideas?"
Hinata and her clone placed their hands on their chin as they contemplated what they were going to do next. They just couldn't go at each other like this. They needed to come up with something different. They eyes simultaneously looked towards the kitchen.
"I've got it!" said the clone. "Stay here!"
She went inside the kitchen, opened the cupboard and looked inside until she found what she was looking for. With a satisfied smile she picked up a small bottle and returned to the bedroom.
"Cinnamon and Honey Syrup?!"
"Our favorite!"
The Cloned!Hinata put some syrup on her fingers and rubbed it around her lips.
"Now… let's try this again…"
The two Hinatas connected their lips once more. Hinata slowly rubbed her lips around her cloned counterpart's and got some syrup around her lips as well. She shyly put her tongue out and started licking the syrup around her clone's lips while her "sister" did the same. Their tongues eventually connected and the two Hinatas started to finally make out.
'This is actually much more enjoyable than the first time… It's a good thing I have sweet tooth, I suppose…' thought the original Hinata as she enjoyed the syrup's taste inside her "sister's" mouth.
"One more?" said the clone.
Hinata looked at Naruto, who was getting visibly aroused by all of this. The look of lust that he had was all the encouragement she needed in order to keep doing this…
…she silently nodded towards her shadow-cloned "sister", who then placed a generous helping of syrup directly on her tongue and assaulted Hinata's mouth.
The kiss was much bolder than before. Hinata's clone was not only kissing her, but also caressing her, and rubbing her hands all over her body...
...Even though she would have preferred Naruto to do this, Hinata had to admit, that this felt kind of nice.
After the kiss, Cloned!Hinata placed some syrup on Hinata's neck and started sucking on it while running her tongue all around it. Hinata felt shivers going down her spine as her clone was licking her face like a lolipop. She let out a loud moan as her eyes rolled upwards.
"Ah… Are you watching this Naruto? Do-Do you like what y-you see?"
She heard a very satisfying gulp, nearby. He was watching this and he was apparently enjoying it immensely.
Hinata felt the syrup drip down her breasts and on to her nipples. She then felt her clone's tongue roll around her round pink areolas, making her nipples go harder with every lick and every sucking motion that she made.
"Shall we show your husband, how much of pervert his wife really is?"
"I-I am not perverted."
"Don't lie to yourself!"
She saw her clone activate her byakugan and then use her jyuken-imbued fingers to press some of the pleasure points she had on her belly. Hinata couldn't help but shiver and shake as her clone gentle-palmed her.
"No! Stop! I don't want Naruto to see this!"
"I believe it's about time you showed it to him!"
The clone's hands now moved downwards. gentle-palming Hinata's buttocks which caused her to twitch and bite her lips...
While Hinata was moaning in pleasure, her clone turned to Naruto.
"Your dear wife never told you she could use the gentle-fist for sex, did she?."
She placed her palm behind Hinata's back and activated her back's pleasure points. Hinata arched backwards at her touch. She could feel herself getting increasingly wet as she felt the pressure points of her hips getting activated. It was something she had done to herself in the past many times before. But this wasn't a side of her that she wanted Naruto to see. Not right now! Not like this!
"I…(ah!) don't get it! Yo-you're supposed to be me! Why are you (ah!) acting like this?"
Hinata's clone looked at her intently with her byakugan fully activated.
"Well, 'sister', it goes like this… when you realize that you are a shadow-clone and that you will be a puff of smoke in the immediate future, you start to stop giving a flying crap about a lot of things. So screw your rules and screw your stupid inhibitions! I am going to show your husband exactly how perverted you really are, and what you get up to behind his back…"
Hinata tried to move her hands in order to dispel her clone, and found that she couldn't move her arms. She was completely immobilized.
'Crap! My shadow-clone must have closed some of my movement pathways. I am completely powerless!'
A look of panic formed on her face as she saw her clone getting ready to place a chakra-imbued gentle-palm inside her already wet panties. She knew what effect this would have on her. She knew that it would send her over the edge...
...she really wasn't prepared to go that far when she agreed to make out with her clone!
"No! Please! Stop!"
"GET THE HELL AWAY FROM HER!"
Hinata's clone was pushed back by a strong shove that caused her to stumble back and fall with her back on the ground. She looked up to see Naruto embracing his wife.
"She told you to stop! What the hell is wrong you?"
"But… I thought you wanted to see this sort of thing."
Cloned!Hinata took a more careful look at Naruto's face. It was flush with anger.
"I don't want to see my wife get subdued and humiliated like this. And I don't want her to do something she doesn't want to do. So stop it!"
He turned to Hinata and held her closer allowing his warmth to envelop her.
"I am sorry. I am sorry that this happened. You don't have to do this anymore, OK?"
He gave her a soft kiss on the lips.
"I love you. I love you so much!"
Hinata felt her arms move again. She embraced her husband and returned the kiss, literally melting in his arms. All thoughts of what had previously happened were pushed away, and replaced by pure loving bliss and sexual desire. The thought that he cared for her and loved her that much turned her on more than any aphrodisiac ever could. She wanted him to have her right here, right now…
...and then the two of them heard a soft sob and turned around…
Hinata's clone was on her knees, crying her eyes out.
"It's not fair… it's just not fair! I look like you, and act like you… I even share the same love that you have for him… and he still only has eyes for you!"
Hinata and Naruto looked at each other before returning their attention back to the clone.
"When you told her that kissing me didn't feel right… I felt like my heart was ripped out of my chest. Like I didn't have anything worth living for anymore!"
She tried to hold back her tears but they just kept flowing, as she continued.
" I am a shadow-clone, I will disappear in a few hours, and I can't have the one thing I love more than anything in the world. I can't have you…it's just not fair!"
Naruto looked at Hinata's clone with a look of concern and wonderment.
'A shadow-clone with going through an existential crisis… In all my time using that jutsu that's the first time I see something like this. What sort of shadow-clone did Hinata create?!'
Hinata and Naruto nodded at each other. They got knelt down next to Cloned!Hinata and both embraced her at the same time.
"That's why you acted like this…"
"You were in pain…"
Naruto, stroked Cloned!Hinata's hair and smiled at her.
"We're sorry… we only saw you as a shadow-clone… a tool! We didn't consider the fact that you actually had feelings of your own..."
The clone looked into Naruto's eyes completely mesmerised.
"In a way, you are still the same wonderful person that my wife is. You share the same memories and the same feelings as her. The difference is that you know you are on a very short time limit and it hurts… doesn't it?"
Hinata's clone nodded in agreement as she moved her face closer.
"Look… your existence might be short… but it doesn't mean it's pointless… and… you are leaning really close..."
She finally couldn't contain herself anymore. She grabbed Naruto's face and attempted to give him a passionate kiss. But Naruto's lips stayed shut.
"Please! Let me just have this! Just this once!"
Naruto guiltily scratched the back of his head as he pulled himself back.
"I'm sorry… but I don't feel right doing something like this..."
"Please! I need this!" she said as tears started to form in her eyes again.
She felt Hinata's hand touch hers as she stood by her side.
"I understand Clone-chan!"
'Clone-chan? She named her shadow-clone "Clone-chan"?!'
"This… is the man... we both love… right?"
'Clone-chan' nodded in agreement as she wiped the tears off her face.
"So what do you say we both kiss him at the same time?"
Naruto's face recoiled in shock? Did his wife really just suggest this?
"Wait, what?"
Before he had any time to react, he felt his wife's lips on his as she held him in a tight embrace. He quickly succumbed to her charms and willingly opened his mouth to allow her tongue to go inside. When his eyes opened for a few seconds, he saw Hinata making a short hand motion inviting 'Clone-chan' to come and join her.
It wasn't long until Naruto felt another set of lips and another tongue invading his mouth. The two tongues twirled around his before briefly twirling around each other and doubling back inside. Hinata then moved away, and allowed 'Clone-chan' to resume kissing Naruto on her own.
He couldn't help but notice that there was a distinct difference between the way the two kissed. While Hinata's kiss was soft,loving and welcoming, 'Clone-chan's' kiss actively tried to consume him. She twirled her tongue inside violently as if she desperately tried to take in every taste that every nook and cranny of his mouth had to offer.
She continued to kiss him like this for a few minutes before Hinata pulled her away, twirled her tongue around her lips and entered her mouth.
"You taste… like… Naruto…"
"You too…"
The two Hinatas were passionately kissing each other savoring the taste of the man they loved that was now residing inside both of them. They then both smiled at each other while looking at him.
"Clone-chan, I think… I am ready to do this now…"
"Are you sure?"
Hinata nodded…
"Yes. It's about time I showed him…"
They both grabbed Naruto's hand and escorted him to the bedroom where they all lied down, next to each other. Naruto felt his wife's hand squeeze his tightly, as if pleading with him not to judge her for what was about to happen.
Naruto was honestly puzzled. He thought he knew his wife inside and out after a year of marriage. What could she possibly hide from him at this point? What could she possibly be ashamed of?
His question was soon answered as 'Clone-chan' activated her Byakygan and her hand turned blue with jyuken-chakra. She started rubbing his wife's body who started squirming in pleasure.
"Na-Naruto… The way 'Clone-chan' touches me right now… the way she touched me before… is how I touch myself when you are away on a mission!"
A sly smile formed on Clone-chan's face as she decided to spill some more of Hinata's beans.
"And it's also how she used to touch herself all the time before you two got together!"
"Cl-Clone-chan!"
"Oh, shut up!" Hinata's clone said playfully as her gentle-palm rubbed that special spot on Hinata's belly which caused her back to arch and her eyes to start rolling upwards.
"See, Naruto… You might think that your wife was this delicate innocent little flower before you two made love for the first time, but in reality… all that time… she was touching herself thinking about doing all sorts of things with you…"
She placed a chakra-filled finger on her breasts.
"Just…"
Then another on her belly…
"Like…"
Then finally one on top of her labia.
"This!"
Hinata screamed out Naruto's name, as she felt a wave of jyuken-induced bliss course though her body. Naruto could only look in amazement as Hinata closed her eyes while writhing in ecstasy.
"I won't tell you how long she's been doing this… But I will tell you that she started doing this long before you two became a couple…"
A jyuken-palm touched Hinata's breasts causing her to shake once more violently. Her clone knew exactly which points she had to press in order to make her go wild…
...she was essentially the same person after all...
"You won't believe how many panties she has soiled while thinking of you… while thinking what she wanted to do with you… How many times she bought herself to finish while she had your image in her mind…"
"It's true Naruto! Everything Clone-chan just said… is true… aaaahhh!"
Clone-chan smiled slyly as she pressured some more of Hinata's pleasure points.
"Why don't you tell your husband what goes through your mind right now?"
Hinata closed her eyes and squeezed Naruto's hand as her cloned used a gentle-palm around her chest.
"Right now… Naruto is squeezing my breasts! His tongue is twirling around my tits. He is softly biting my nipples…"
Naruto was honestly shocked. He had never heard Hinata talk like this before.
"Shall we show him how wet you are for him right now?"
"Y-Yes! Show it to him!"
Hinata's shadow-clone moved Hinata's underwear downwards, and opened up her legs in order to give Naruto a full view of his wife's labia. It had a distinct reddish color and it was glistening with her love juices. And it was literally pulsating, aching for more…
A gentle-palm moved over it and started caressing it sending waves of pleasure all over her eager body.
"And right now? What is Naruto doing?"
"He-He is twirling his tongue all around my horny pussy! But, I don't want his tongue! I-I want his hard cock inside me!"
"Like this?"
Clone-chan's fingers had a bright blue glow as they entered Hinata and twirled all around inside her.
"Y-Yes! Like this! I can feel his cock entering me! Tearing me apart! I am loving every second of it!"
She could feel her clone's fingers chakra width and pace increase, as she was getting ready to climax.
"Make me cum Naruto! Come inside me! Aaahhh!"
She let out a guttural scream as her body convulsed from pleasure. Her face was now completely distorted as she surrendered herself to her orgasm. When she finally stopped spasming her clone moved out her love-juice filled hands and bought them back to Hinata's lips.
As Hinata eagerly tasted her clone's soaked fingers, she turned to her husband and squeezed his hand once more.
"Naruto… This is my dirty side…"
She saw him lie down next to her and also taking a lick from her clone's fingers before giving her a warm kiss on the lips.
"Why do you call it 'dirty'? It's just a side of you, you've never shown me before… and it's beautiful!"
"Eh?"
She couldn't mistake the love that was in his eyes as he said this.
"You honestly thought I would think less of you if I found out you were 'pleasuring yourself' while I was away on missions? Or if I found out that you had those sort of fantasies with me, before we became a couple? After a year of marriage, I thought you knew me better than that, Hinata!"
Hinata's eyes sparkled.
"Really?"
"I love this side of you! In fact, I wish you had shared it with me sooner."
She leaned over to his chest, sighing in contentment… she was happy that her husband had seen this and accepted her.
"Besides… I also…"
He proceeded to do an 'air quote' motion…
"...'pleasured myself' thinking of you before we became a couple…"
The two Hinatas looked at him in shock as he said this. This was something that they really didn't know up until now. As far as they could tell, Naruto wasn't really interested sexually in Hinata up until the first time they made love to each other.
"When did you…"
"The first time was during the moon mission… When we spent some time alone with each other… We found a fountain with fresh water, we forgot to bring our canteens with us, so I picked up some with my hands and gave it to you to drink… Do you remember?"
Hinata definitely remembered. It was one of her most precious memories with him.
"When I saw your lips eagerly drink from my hands and felt them softly touch my skin… I felt something I haven't felt up until now. I wanted to kiss you, to caress you, to do all sorts of things to you."
He exhaled deeply as he said this. He might as well finish confessing this now that he finally got around to admitting it.
"No matter how much I tried, I couldn't get that image of you drinking water from the palm of my hand out of my mind. I saw it every time I closed my eyes… and… it morphed into you doing... other things with me…"
He looked at the palm of his hand.
"That night on the moon… I couldn't get any sleep… I was too turned on… so… when everybody fell asleep, I sort of went in a dark corner where nobody could see me and…"
"You played with yourself while thinking of 'original-chan'!" said Hinata's clone.
Naruto couldn't help but blush…
"Uhm... yeah…"
Hinata smiled softly at her husband and caressed the whisker marks on his cheeks.
"Hentai!"
"I guess that now makes two of us, huh?"
A pressing question popped into Hinata's head. She just had to ask this.
"Naruto, if you don't mind me asking…"
"Sure, go ahead."
"Before… me… what sort of women were you thinking about while you, were uhm… 'pleasuring yourself'?"
Clone-chan saw no sign of lying with her activated byakugan as Naruto said the next sentence.
"I didn't think of any other women. That time on the moon mission was the first time I ever did it."
"Huh?"
Hinata was genuinely shocked. She always thought that, as the guy who invented the Sexy-No-Jutsu, and as the apprentice of one of the biggest perverts in Konoha, Naruto would, at the very least, have some "hands-on" experience with himself.
"I used to get some wet dreams from time to time, but for some reason I couldn't remember any of them. I never felt the need to do something like that before."
"So, let me get this straight… the first time you... played with yourself… you were thinking about me?"
Naruto gave her one of his patented grins…
"Yeah… I know it must creep you out..."
"It doesn't creep me out… in fact… I think it's… sweet."
"Really?"
He felt his wife's lips on his cheeks.
"Really! So…"
"So?"
One of her patented sly smiles formed on her lips again.
"The first time you did this… What sort of things were you doing to me?"
"Why don't I just show you?"
As he was about to finally start ravishing his wife he heard "Clone-chan's" voice again.
"Oh, no you won't! I am not going to watch you two lovebirds screw like bunnies while I just sit here and watch like an idiot!"
She swiftly moved herself between Naruto and Hinata, sandwiching her body in.
"Whatever you are going to do to her, you are going to do to me as well!"
He looked at Hinata with a look of concern.
"Are you really ok with this?"
"She is essentially me. We share the same memories and the same feelings. And it's thanks to her that I finally got rid of my final few inhibitions towards you. And you finally confessed that part of you to me... I believe she deserves that much…"
"OK… In that case… the first thing I imagined you doing…"
He quickly took off his pants and his underwear and rubbed his cock between Hinata's breasts. He then started rubbing it between Clone-chan's bossom. The two Hinata's both slowly kissed it and licked its tip as it rubbed against them.
"Then I imagined moving my head downwards and…"
He started licking and sucking Hinata's nipples before going for her shadow-clone's chest. The two Hinatas moaned in pleasure as he found his face sandwiched between two beautiful sets of breasts and he began alternating between them.
"Then I thought of you lying down and I…"
His head moved further down, kissing the two Hinatas' bodies and caressing every curve of their bodies that his hands could lay on. He found himself looking at two very lovely, pink and moist vaginas that were eagerly inviting him with their smell to kiss them and taste them.
He licked Hinata's first while putting his fingers inside Clone-chan's. He knew exactly how to move his face in order to make both of them squirm in pleasure. He switched position and tasted both of them. He could hear their breathing becoming heavier and their bodies begin to convulse as he went to work on them.
"And then I finally got up and I…"
He rubbed his throbbing erection around Hinata's wet slit and easily entered her. He saw her face contort as she moved her hips downwards in order for him to reach the deeper parts of her. He began to move slowly at first and then steadily increased his pace.
"Please!" said Hinata's clone as she laid on top of her and opened up her labia inviting Naruto to get inside her as well.
"Please… do me too…"
Naruto briefly stopped and looked at his wife as if asking her "are you sure you're OK with this?"
Hinata only nodded as if saying "It's OK."
He pulled out of Hinata and moved inside her shadow-clone. As soon as he did so, her facial expression changed into one of pure unadulterated bliss.
"Naruto is finally inside me! I am so happy!"
She then turned to Hinata, smiled at her and gave her a soft kiss on the lips.
"Thank you! Thank you so much for allowing this!"
Naruto kept alternating between entering his wife and entering "Clone-chan". Again, he noticed a distinct difference between the two.
'Clone-chan' felt nice and she was every bit as eager and passionate and Hinata, but Hinata had something that the clone lacked. Hinata felt more familiar and more comfortable. The best way he could describe it in his mind was that entering Hinata felt like entering…
...home!
Hinata's body was his home! His haven! It was where he belonged!
And right now, as he entered his wife's shadow clone, he began to appreciate how warm, welcoming and beautiful that "home" truly was. While 'Clone-chan' shared Hinata's feelings and memories, she somehow felt… foreign and distant. She couldn't replace Hinata. Nothing would ever replace Hinata…
…but he would still screw Clone-chan's brain out.
"Yes! Yes! I am coming! Please Naruto! Don't pull out just yet! Let me cum!"
She soon started shaking and screamed Naruto's name in ecstasy as an orgasm coursed through her body.
"Na-Naruto made me cum! I'm...I'm so happy!"
And with that she puffed into smoke and disappeared.
Hinata immediately felt more horny and eager as the more recent memory of her clone having sex with Naruto invaded her mind. Her body became more eager and more sensitive to Naruto's touch…
...and then the rest of the clone's memories came back at her…
…She felt the memory of Naruto telling her that kissing her didn't feel right. She felt the memory of watching Naruto making out with her while she could only stand idly and watch. She felt the memory Naruto pushing her away in order to defend her. She felt the memory of him refusing to kiss her. Tears started to form in her eyes as she finally understood what "Clone-chan" must have felt like during all of this.
'So that's how it is… when the one you love rejects you for another.'
"Na-Naruto?"
She felt his lips connect with hers as he gave her a deep passionate kiss.
"Hinata… I'm sorry! I love you so much!"
"Naruto…"
"You are my haven! My home! I don't want anybody else in my life! I only want you!"
And just like that, the pain in her heart melted away.
"I belong to you! There will never be another woman in my life! I don't want another woman in my life!"
Hinata didn't say anything back. Instead she slowly guided his member back inside her, and wrapped her legs around his waist in order for him to finally return…
...home!
Afterword: Pillow Talk
"Hinata, I get it why you were embarrassed about the whole 'pleasuring yourself' thing, but why didn't you ever tell me that you could use your gentle-fist in a sexual way?"
Hinata sighed… She was afraid he was going to ask this eventually…
"Because the sexual gentle-fist techniques were not originally meant to be used for pleasure."
"What were they used for then?"
"Defense and assassinations."
"What?!"
She slouched her head forward as she explained further.
"OK, first the defense part. Women who possess the byakugan learn how to sexually incapacitate someone in case they get captured and somebody attempts to… have his way with them. They learn what tenketsu points to press with various different parts of their body in order to slowly block a captor's chakra flow to their brain in order to render them unconscious and make their escape."
"And the assassination part?"
"We learn what sort of tenketsu points we have to press in order to send a man's pleasure levels to dangerous heights. By activating the proper pathways, a woman who possess the byakugan can easily murder someone while sleeping with them and make it look like it's over-exertion, or natural causes."
"Oh..."
"This is why I never told you. How would you feel if you knew that your partner had the ability to kill you by having sex with you?"
"So… That's why you never told me…"
"My gentle-fist is not a sex-toy Naruto. I can theoretically use it to enhance our sexual experience, but what if I lose control? What If I activate the wrong pathway and end up hurting you?"
"Hinata… You once fixed my arm with your gentle-fist and I once saw you revive someone by opening up his chakra pathway. I don't think there's anybody else who is more in control than you. If you do decide to use your gentle-fist in the bedroom, I think I'll be fine."
She blushed as she took in his compliment. She was genuinely flattered that he had so much belief in her abilities.
"What about the byakugan?"
"Yeah, what about the byakugan?"
"In order for me to properly use the gentle-fist on someone, I need to have my byakugan active…"
"So?"
"Don't you think I look scary, or ugly when I activate it?"
Naruto got off the bed and picked up Hinata. He placed his forehead on hers and looked straight into her beautiful lavender eyes.
"Hinata, please… activate your byakugan for me."
"Now?"
"Yep!"
"Are you sure?"
"Positive!"
The veins on Hinata's head bulged around her face as a darkly purple pupil formed inside her formerly pupil-less eyes and her byakugan became active. Instead of moving away, like people normally do, Naruto leaned in closer. He kissed her bulging veins sending shivers down her eyes. And then he looked inside her newly former pupil.
"Beautiful! Even with your byakugan active you are still beautiful."
As he kissed her lips once more, Hinata's byakygan saw his golden chakra flow and immediately became entranced by it. It was like a warm comforting breeze.
She slowly pushed him away. At first he seemed disappointed but then he noticed that her byakugan was still active and that her palms were glowing with a pale blue light.
Hinata gave him another sly smile.
"Do you trust me?"
"Absolutely! Believe it" (A/N: Sorry guys! I couldn't resist!)
She would give him a night he would never forget.
OMAKE! OMAKE! OMAKE! (written by Not-So-GentleFist)
The door to Naruto's apartment opened, allowing the blonde to step inside. "I'm back from the mission, Hinata!" he called out.
The heiress appeared from the kitchen to greet her boyfriend. "I'm glad your ok! I missed you so much."
"I missed you too honey." Naruto leaned in to steal a kiss from his girlfriend for the first time in a week.
...Only to be denied with a handover his mouth separating their lips.
"Sorry, but you know I don't kiss clones."
The clone sighed in resignation. 'Dammit, she can always tell,' it thought. "The boss wanted me to tell you the team decided to go out for a drink to celebrate, I'm just dropping off his stuff," he said as he returned his bag and equipment to its rightful place.
"Can't I just get a little smooch?" he whined. "Come on, just a peck? Maybe a little tongue too? We could always move to the bed to get more comfortable, and just see where it goes from there?" he begged, a perverse grin on his face.
Hinata giggled at the clones desperateness. "Sorry, but I only do those thing for Naruto-kun."
The clone's eyes doubled in size, tears pooling in the corners as he sent her the saddest puppy-dog eyes he could muster. "I missed you for so long... I thought of you every single day I was gone; I couldn't wait to come back and see my beautiful girlfriend who I love... And now that I finally am back, I cannot even get the kiss I have been wanting so badly all this time? I'm just going to be ignored; unwanted..." He threw his head up, his arm covering his eyes as he cried to the heavens. "Perhaps I should not have come home at all; there is no place for me here if the girl I love does not even want me around!"
"Nice try."
Naruto looked back down disappointed. "Aww, come on! It worked for your clone!" he whined.
"Well... I suppose I could do something for you."
The clone was grinning and bouncing like a kid in a candy store at her suggestive tone. "Tell me... How do you like this?"
The Hyuga activated her byakugan as she sidled up to him with a sultry sway. Her hand moved to his abdomen, contacting a few points with precision as chakra ran through her fingers. The clone groaned, his tense body shaking as pleasure built up in his body. It was less than a minute before his manhood was fully erected, without even needing to be touched there.
"Better than a kiss, right?" she questioned in a purr as she continued striking the points she knew would drive him wild. The clone could only nod and whimper as spasms racked his body.
He was inches away from the edge of his climax; only one more strike would push him over. Positioning her hand, Hinata moved to his ear and whispered, "Let Naruto-kun know I am waiting for him in our bedroom." With that, she hit the pleasure point, injecting just enough chakra to disperse the clone too.
Naruto suddenly tensed, almost dropping the bottle he was holding. He jumped off his stool with a sense of urgency, turning swiftly to his friends. "Sorry guys, but I gotta go!" And with that, he bolted out of the bar, leaving behind a group of very confused shinobi.
"What was that about?" Lee wondered.
"I dunno... But is it just me, or did he have a complete..." Tenten trailed off, embarrassed.
"Hard-on?" Kiba supplied.
"Hm... I suppose he cannot be dickless then," Sai commented thoughtfully, brainstorming new nicknames.
"...Troublesome."
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Whew! That turned out much bigger than I actually expected it to be. I hope you still enjoyed it. After all, you asked for it!
I knew I could never get away with having Hinata or Naruto act OOC, so I did the next best thing and tried to give Hinata's clone a distinct and distinguishable personality that was somehow similar to the one she had in the Road to Ninja movie. I am sorry guys, but this is the only way I could make the omake work.
As for the reason the clone acts like RTN Hinata: Imagine you are a clone who knows that is a clone. Imagine you know that you will probably cease to exist in the next few hours or even minutes. Then imagine the person you love more than anything in the world telling you that you are not good enough for him (or her). And then imagine him(or her) making out in front of someone who is, for all intents and purposes your identical twin...
...you might be a tiny bit upset.
If you don't like that reason, fine. Enjoy the omake for what it is: A story that doesn't take place in normal manga continuity. It doesn't have to make sense.
As for what happened between Hinata and Naruto after the "Pillow Talk"... I am going to save the story for NaruHina Smut Month in August.
OK, I am off for now.
The next prompt, "Hinata's POV" is something I am really looking forward to write.