REWRITE NOTICE!

HEY FOLKS, SAURUSROCK625 HERE. AND HOW ABOUT A LITTLE STORYTIME? SO, I WAS READING OVER THIS STORY TO SEE IF I COULD WRITE UP ANOTHER CHAPTER FOR IT, PREFERABLY ONE THAT'S MUCH LONGER THAN WHAT I HAVE POSTED IN THE PAST, AND I CAME TO A STARTLING REALIZATION ABOUT THIS STORY. IT'S ALL A JUMBLED MESS!

I DIDN'T TAKE THE TIME TO GIVE THE CHARACTERS ANY KIND OF DECENT DEVELOPMENT AND JUST STARTED OFF CERTAIN EMOTIONAL ATTACHMENTS FAR TOO EASILY. EXAMPLE BEING THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN DANNY AND KAI. OR THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN DANNY AND DESIREE, OR DANNY AND EMBER! IT'S ALL A RUSHED, JUMBLED MESS!

AND ANOTHER THING! THE PLOT OF THE STORY IS ALSO A MESS! IT DOESN'T FLOW PROPERLY LIKE A STORY IS SUPPOSED TO, AND JUST FEELS LIKE I TOOK WHATEVER I WAS THINKING AT THE TIME AND GLUED IT TOGETHER BECAUSE I WAS DESPERATE FOR REVIEWS! AND YOU KNOW WHAT? I WAS BACK THEN! I REALLY WANTED TO READ EVERYONE'S OPINIONS ON MY STORY AND OFTEN FELT DISAPPOINTED IF A CHAPTER GOT VERY LITTLE TO NO REVIEWS. NOW, I KNOW I CAN'T CONTROL WHETHER OR NOT PEOPLE REVIEW MY STORIES OR NOT, BUT READING THIS STORY, I NOW UNDERSTAND WHY THEY DIDN'T

THIS STORY FEELS LIKE IT'S A JUMBLED MESS OF NOTES GLUED TOGETHER BY A THREE YEAR OLD!

I DON'T MEAN TO SOUND LIKE A BROKEN RECORD, BUT THAT'S JUST HOW I FEEL!

But in all seriousness, I was excited to write this story when I was given a request from author ILOVESKITTLEZZZZ years ago to write this idea. As a result, I'm not going to abandon the story, because I still love my story and want to make it a respectable story that everyone can enjoy. I'm just going to rewrite it and make it flow more like a story with an actual plot.

So, until next time, folks. See ya.