hey guys im back wid my stry...
The theme is nt cmpltly mine
sm1 has gvn me the theme, i have ammended it with help of SHZK apa and my di
iss stry ki theme line ki jariye mein kisi ki koi blv ko hurt nahi krna cahti bt stl advnce apologize..
Aur rahi bat couples fan ki u all btr skip my stry as alwys..hehe
acha spcl thnks to gd bhaiya zehra apa krittika di and my plot giver..
Let me strt..it may b confusing so have patience
okkk let me tl u some alternations i have made
first to i have considered rajat present as cid officer in team while behrupiya episode is aired
second i have considered daya death aftr the epi..the revieve back of life in him is altered
retired acp abhijeet is sitting with most grave expressions on his face and present acp rajat sitting across him with a mixed expression of sad tensed sorrow and hope
"sir pls uski iss seher mey koi rehne ka intejam nahi aur uski hostels mey banti nahi..4 jagah ghum liya usne aab to raat var recrd room mey hi rehta hey..aap to akele hi rehte hey to.."
"to kya..tumhe pata hey na mujhe nahi pasand kisi aur ka.."
"sir aap ek bar usse mil to le.."
"rajat bekar mey kiu.."
"sir anand pura daya sir ki tarah.."
abhijeet stood up with a jerk "kya mtlb hey tumhara.."
"sir pls aap ek bar aap mil to lijiye..unki har harqat.."
abhijeet look at rajat silently who got up from his place and moved to the duo photograph present in the hall, he continued dreamily..
"uski ankhe..hasi..baatein sab..sab inki jaise hi to hey..cehra chal bol awaj sab..bas farq itna ki ise sharmana nahi ata serf gussa ata hey baat baat pey..thora bigra hua hey..baat nahi manta hey per fir bhi kahi na kahi ek hi hey..kaise kiu..pata nahi..aap jab milenge tab.."
abhijeet cut him with
"tum kya keh jarahe ho rajat hosh bhi hey?"
rajat shook his head "pata nahi.."
abhijeet sat down again with "22saal ho gaya hey rajat wo hum sab se bahut dur bahut hi..wo nahi laut sakta rajat kabhie nahi.." abhijeet closed his eyes tightly..
rajat too sat dwn jerked his head badly "mujhe nahi pata sir..koi science koi logic nahi de sakta mey aapko..bas mujhe itna pata hey kuch to hey..mujhe nahi pata per jab jab anand ko dekhta hu daya sir ki hi yaad..sir sach mey nahi pata kiu.."
abhijeet was looking at rajat confusingly who got up with a jerk "sorry sir mein..mein chalta hu.."
he was about to move out..when abhijeet called from behind "kal free ho?"
rajat didnt turned but replied "sir mein use le ayunga kal.."
"nahi..yeaha ..yeaha nahi...mujhe bas use dekhna.."
rajat smiled with "aap bureau ajayiega.."
"nahi woha sab.."
rajat turned he had never found his senior so hesitant..
"bureau ki smne wale cafeteria mey ajayiega..woha mein aur inspctr anand rehenge.."
abhijeet nodded..
"ummm rajat..present team ki koi tasveer hogi na tumhare pass?"
rajat nodded "kal subha sbse pehle pahuch gaya tha mein to anand apne desk pey soya hua tha..meine tabhie soch liya tha aapko dikhana hey..yea lijiye.."
he frwrded his cell..abhijeet looked at the photo with fixed gaze..a slim young face is half buried over desk files
"22saal ho gaye..isko dekha bhi nahi..Pata hey 32saal pehle bilkul aisa dikhta tha..masum sa..tab utna mota bhi to nahi.."
his voice chocked..
Rajat too took his seat.. "humare acp sir fir sahi kehte they ki aapki lad se hi bigar gaye they daya sir.."
abhijeet smiled through tears "rajat nahi yea sach nahi ho sakta..hum sab ki khush failmi hey yea bas..q
he handed back the phone and got up
rajat shook his head "pata nahi.."
abhijeet closed his eyes..rajat got up and moved out silently abhijeet's mind was hammering with
"boss tum jo bhi kaho mein nahi chorne wala tumhara peecha.."
"cahe kisi bhi janam ho kuch bhi krke mein tumhare sarr pey sawar hoke hi rahunga.."
abhijeet sighed and looked at the photo smilling at him
"kya rajat ki galat faimi hey yea sach mey hi..nahi nahi..mein bhi na...life koi film thori hey" his mind flashed with incident happened back 22 yrs back he moved to his room with "manohar ek strong coffee dena.."
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Rajat moved back to bureau found the restroom door opened,he entered to find anand sitting with a burger in his hand changing channels
"anand.."
"sir aap..srry sir wo sab chale gaye to bas..aap bhi to chale gaye they..achanaq kaise gaye?"
rajat scowled
"srry sir..wo mein..srry"
rajat sighed with "tum aj bhi raat yeahi bitaoge?"
"jee sir wo.."
"hmm..acha wo do files complete hua?"
"jee...file wo.."
rajat look at him sternly then just shook his head with "kal taq wo do files complete cahiye mujhe.."
and moved out..
Anand grumbled with "kya musibat hey mein jitna inn files se dur vagti hu utna hi..hmmm kal kisiki kandhe pey dalna hoga"
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Next day rajat was in his cabin when his phone rang "hello acp rajat kumar speaking"
"rajat anand ko.."
"arey sir aap..haan hum ate hey.."
he moved out found anand sitting on someone's desk lecturing about something..
Rajat cleared his throat with "anand sunna jara"
anand got up with "jee jee sir.."
"jara mere saath ana.."
anand nodded and followed..rajat strted aftr moving out "tumhe pg rehne ki gher cahiye tha.."
"haan sir mil gaya?" he nearly jumped..
Rajat looked at him he cntrolled so rajat continued "meine abhijeet sir se.."
anand cut him huriedly with "kisse?"
"abhijeet sir..humare acp they.."
getting no response he looked at anand who was thinkging smthng deeply..the lines on his forehead is too deepend..
"anand.."
"haan..nahi..jee sir..."
rajat didnt continued frther but both enterd the cafe and moved to the table..
Rajat came frwrd with "sir.."
abhijeet who was looking outside turned back "arey rajat baitho..kaha hey anand.."
rajat looked around "yeahi to.."
then turn back to found anand standing few steps back silently..
Rajat called "anand.."
abhijeet too followed his gaze this time and automatically stood up...
Both eyes were fixed..
Boss mein jitna bhi disguise karu tum humesha pehchan kaise lete ho...
Abbey tu jaha bhi chup ja tujhe dhundna mere baye haath ka khel hey
ek din mein samne rahunga per pass nahi dekhna..hunh
boss tum jab apne 60's mey hoge mtlb lagvag 63-64..tab kaise lagoge?budhe boss?
rajat softly pressed abhijeet's arms who came back to senses with "parso se reh sakta hey.."
and he moved out without any further conversation..
Anand was still in a trance..
Aftr abhijeet left rajat moved to anand and strted "anand kuch pareshani.."
anand looked towards rajat and shook in no..
"sir ne kaha parso se tum sir ki gher mey as pg.."
"unke bandra east ki gher.." whispered anand in extreme low voice
"kya.."
anand came back
"jee..haan kya keh rahe they aap.."
rajat shook his head with "kandivali west mey hey unka gher parso waise bhi tumhara weekly off hey..adress de dunga...khud dekh loge na?mumbai mey naye ho to.."
"jee mein ker lunga..thnk u sir.."
rajat just smilled with "per dhyan rahe sir bahut disciplined hey..jara thik se rehna.."
and he moved anand's ear was buzzing with
"yea kamra hey yea store room..."
"apna kaam khud kerle warna pitega warning de raha hu.."
he clutched his head and jerked it with "mein yea sab kya..."
he heard a call "anand chale.."
he hurried with "jee sir.."
and he too moved to bureau hurriedly.
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Abhijeet got in his car and ordered the driver to move to house
he rested back his head
"yea sach..per kaise..per wohi ankhe wohi bolti hui cehra..wo sab..tu sach mey laut aya?"
thnks to all who reviwed my earliar three OS..
Guest i will nt write the stry on CID khtre mey,someone else will b writting it..thats in may
Shaina i wl try on zehrila bichu,per abhijeet ki bachpan per kya likhu?kuch samajh nahi araha..can u help pls?
GD thnk u very much fr the suggestions,agey se mein asehi light tarike se baat ko present krne ki koshish karungi
Aashna do u hve any theme to write on frndshp of these three?purvi centric cahte ho aap per pls invstigative yea purvi ko jyada sad jyada chulbuli type mat kehna..im bad at those..aur koi couple dscsn and inclusion to krne wali nahi..aab aap jaldi se theme soch k bata do
Rai to tomar o mne hay j dietting jaruri?;( bechara k kheteo dite chao na shanti mato:(
Jyoti kaan pakar k maafi..dnt be angry pls..and dnt b saddy...smile plsss!:*
chalo rvw this chaptr quick quick