So i said i would be rewriting this story and i have rewritten chapter 1!

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Shadowfate~

Chapter 1

I read through the papers currently littering my desk and sigh Trying to come up with or at least think of a chapter for the project I'm working on

"Ugh, I honestly didn't think it would be this hard" I mutter standing up and falling back onto my bed, I look over at my the clock it's blood red numbers indicating that it was well after midnight.

"My boss is going to have my head in the morning.." I say with a sigh

I feel my eyelids grow heavy and before I know it I'm asleep, I feel as if I'm falling or at least have a odd sensation of weightlessness when I do wake up I find I'm under a tree in a forest,

"what the hell?" I mutter sitting up from my odd position I crack my neck and let out a huge sigh before standing up and looking around for any signs as to where I am.

Konoha~

Hashirama senju quietly hummed a tune as he made his way to the forest grounds where the training field would be contently he sighed thinking about the things that had happened in the past few months since the village had been formed and established the bitter rivalry between the senju and uchiha was finally a thing of the past and they could now coexist in harmony and for that he was especially thankful he could now finally look to the future with hope of not having to send his children out into battle against the uchiha, his thoughts then turned to his soon to be wife Mito Uzumaki, she was a wonderful woman and in more ways then one she was stern but gentle with the force to demolish anything or anyone who threaten something she loved, He was truly a lucky man to be marrying someone so amazing, deep n thought he barely noticed his younger brother coming up to him.

"aniki" he heard the stoic voice say as he glanced over to see his brother's red eyes staring at him a scroll in hand

"ah tobirama what is it you have in your hand there?" hashirama says cheerfully finally broken out of his thoughts

Tobirama sighs and hands the scroll to his older brother "this scroll would be the blueprints for the new training field and academy building." he says

His older brother takes the scroll and opens it surveying the points and architecture "ah! This is wonderful!" he says

"Indeed, brother we shou.." he starts but doesn't get to finish as a strange and very strong unfamiliar chakra sends both senju brother's into a tense and defensive stance.

Both look at one another and simply nod before taking off to defend the village they both worked so hard to create.

Meanwhile back in the Forest~

I walk down a hill through some more thicker trees pushing branches away and out of my face I shield my face from the harsh sunlight as I make my way into another clearing, I look around and bite my lip in agitation the wind picks up and sends my bright mint colored locks flying back I shield my eyes and look around surveying the area when the hairs on the back of my neck stand straight up.. I cautiously look around looking for any signs of danger or threats and see none, I walk over to a large lake and bend down taking some cool water and splashing it on my face, deciding to wash my now tattered clothing I peer around looking to see if anyone was close that would see me, seeing no one I strip my shirt off slowly noting a sharp pain in my left shoulder I place my hand over the spot and rub the aching muscle, I stand up straight and strip down to my underwear I cover my breasts with my hands and step into the water which is rather cold my breath hitches for a moment as I wade farther in water I suck in a breath and go under water scrubbing my hair working my hands through the tangled mess of dirt and leaves.

When both brothers arrive to the clearing where the strangely strong chakra was coming from they didn't see anything, "this isn't right I swear I sensed that chakra here.." tobirama says furrowing his eyebrows his brother places a hand on his shoulder and frowns "whoever is was has gone away from here apparently.." he says

"I suppose your right.. But no one, not even myself can move that fast hashirama.. It just doesn't make sense" the younger senju says folding his arms over his chest as both brothers make their way over the lake hashirama looks down noting there were women's clothing laying by the bankside, he picks up the shirt and shows his brother they both share a look and look out at the lake "A woman?" hashirama says furrowing his eyebrows

The younger senju huffs "there is no way that a woman had that amount of chakra.." he says through gritted teeth, Leaving his brother on the bank tobirama walks out onto the lake and looks around for any sign of someone.

I see a shadow appear over the water where I am and I tense up and try not to move as the figure stops above me I watch them peer around and then start to walk away I mentally sigh in relief and swim a little further away from where I can get out of the water without being detected.

All is fine until I'm snatched out of the water by my hair I let out a cry of pain and start to struggle against the force yanking me up.

"stop struggling!" I hear a mans voice growl I immdeiately look up into the vermillion eyes of my attacker and I can literally feel the color drain from my face

I feel both anger and fear well up in my chest as I stare back at him, his grip on my hair eases and he grabs my upper arm. Holding me above the water as another man appears out of literally no where I visibally jump earning a ghost of a smirk from the man tightly holding my arm. Before I know it we're back on dry land and I scramble to pull my oversized shirt on.

"Who are you?" the one with dark hair and dark eyes asks me, while he is being stern I can tell he has a kind heart.

"I..I'm.." I start but I'm cut off by another voice

"who. Are. You?" he says darkly

I turn and stare straight into a pair of ruby red eyes which are narrowed into slits, I turn my head away from his opposing glare only to have my chin roughly turned back to face him

I can feel my heart hammering against my ribs sweat beads on my brow, I raise my hand and grip his "My name is Nozomi fukai" I say through gritted teeth I see a ghost of a smirk for on his lips as he continues to hold my chin facing him

"Brother, let the girl go.." I hear the other man says, I hear the man before me growl he releases my chin and stands back up folding his arms across his chest.

The other man crouches down and holds out a hand to help me up I take it and stand up hugging my shirt closely to my frame.

"well Nozomi, I am hashirama and the man over there is my brother tobirama" he says with a smile I feel a small but cautious smile form on my lips

"can you tell me where we are" I say nervously looking down again

"we are just outside of Konoha.. " he says which earns a confused look from me

"do you not have a place to stay?" he asks with a concerned look

I look down again and solemnly shake my head no, suddenly he grabs my hand and yanks me towards his direction

"what!?" I yell as he pulls me along

He looks back cheerfully "we have plenty of space and places for you to stay in the village! I'll have mito set you up with some things and such" he says but before we can get any farther his brother grabs his shoulder and yanks him aside I stand there a little nervous at what they were discussing..

"Fine hashirama, Do as you please.. Your as stubborn as a mule" tobirama says with a agitated huff

Hashirama motions for me to fallow him I sigh and walk past tobirama peering at him out of the corner of my eye his oppresive gaze stares right back, when we finally arrive back in their village I am shown to a room overlooking the village which holds a desk and simple furnature.

"have a seat I will be right back" Hashirama says leaving me and his brother standing there, I walk over and peer out the window looking at the vast amount of space the village is built upon amazed at what had been built and the beauty of it all when I hear a small noise behind me.

I turn around and find two red shards staring me down "don't even think about doing anything stupid. I know your chakra signature now and granted your power may be on level foot with my own or even closer with my brothers.." he says taking a step closer to me closing the gap between us until he's practically in my face again he leans down and make's eye contact with me "I won't hesitate to kill you." My eyes widen a fraction and I can feel my heart hammering in my chest he get's closer to me.

I back up furtheraway from him, holding up my hands as if to say "hello I am so not a threat!" he grabs my wrists and gets closer

" do you understand me?" He says to me I feel his cool breath on my face, I nod trying to keep a mask on void of any emotion but on the inside I'm screaming bloodly murder

Noticing that him being this close to her made her flustered and uncomfortable which made him smirk to himself, he would have to remember to do this more often, especially the way her heart sped up when he came closer to her, her eyes widening a fraction and a light pink tint coloring her porcelain cheeks.

"remember my warning.. Little fukai.." he says as he backs away from me shortly after that hashirama comes back in with a woman with red hair and dark eyes.

"we have much to discuss" hashirama says "Please have a seat Nozomi.."